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Hi!

Does this quotation make sense to anybody? Is it properly written?

“The head teacher does not have the status he deserves. If he were a leader in his school as they are saying, he would have been given the freedom…The ‘one-decision-for-all’ approach will never succeed for what is convenient to a school in Cairo may not be to another school somewhere else. So, more freedom should be given to the head teacher if we want to get a good product. There should be space for creativity”.
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will never succeed, for what is convenient

otherwise fine to me.
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Egyptian2007Hi!

Does this quotation make sense to anybody? Is it properly written?

“The head teacher does not have the status he deserves. If he were a leader in his school as they are saying, he would have been given the freedom…The ‘one-decision-for-all’ approach will never succeed for what is convenient to a school in Cairo may not be to another school somewhere else. So, more freedom should be given to the head teacher if we want to get a good product. There should be space for creativity”.
Whe the sign of ellipsis? Has something been removed?
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Yes. I have removed a bit which I thought irrelevant. Is there anything wrong?
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Yes, it sounds as if there is a bit missing. It suggests the Head Teacher would be given the freedom to do something.

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Egyptian2007Yes. I have removed a bit which I thought irrelevant. Is there anything wrong?
No