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The above are the particulars of Miss XXX’s pay during her employment with our company from September 2005 to August 2013, totaling xxx yuan. Her personal income tax has been withheld and remitted by our company.

Hi. This is my translation of part of an income certificate. Does the underlined part make good sense to your teachers’ ears?

Thank you.

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