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Hello teachers,
Could you please take a look at the email below and let me know if any problems. Kate is a new friend, therefore I would prefer to sound casual but not too casual. Thank you very much!


"Hi kate,

Long time no see you!

If it’s not too much trouble, I have a question about translucent panels for you. Jon wants to do a small addition to the store and I suggested him to use the panels from XXX as a room divider. I really like their products but I realized that after asking for a quote, that the total price exceeds my goal, though it is within close rage … What really surprised me was shipping… almost $100. Do you happen to know any affordable company that does translucent panels like that?

I Hope everything is going well for your and family, and I hope to see you guys soon!
Regards,
TCL"
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TclHello teachers,
Could you please take a look at the email below and let me know if any problems. Kate is a new friend, therefore I would prefer to sound casual but not too casual. Thank you very much!


"Hi, Kate,

Long time no see you!

If it’s not too much trouble, I have a question about translucent panels for you. Jon wants to do a small addition to the store and I suggested him to use he uses the panels from XXX as a room divider. I really like their products but I realized, after asking for a quote, that the total price exceeds my goal,budget though it is within close range … What really surprised me was shipping… almost $100. Do you happen to know any affordable company that does translucent panels like that?

I hope everything is going well for your and family, and I hope to see you guys soon!
Regards,
TCL"
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Feebs11
TclI hope everything is going well for your and family, and I hope to see you guys soon!

I think, you and your family sounds more natural.