The tradition that a family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons and what are the impacts?

Today, the more the world is developing, the more likely people are to gather around the table and eat together. There are a great amount of reasons behind this change and problems that need to considering.

To begin with, no one can deny that people are more engaged with work and study than those in the past that they forget the existence of each member in the family. They have to complete unlimited tasks under pressure and a chievements; therefore, meal time is no longer crucial to them because they have to spend every single second to finish. More seriously, some families always have conflicts with money, kids, marriage and other similar things, so it is difficult for them to join the meals with others. As a result, the times people spend time with each other in meals gradually decreases and one day, it will permanently disappear.

Consequently, several reasons above contribute to lessening the love and making a distance between people. They will not care about each other if they keep being busy and hurting others. Futhermore, they will become more and more emotionless. For example, when a woman spends most of her time in workplace that she does not have time to cook. It means that her husband and children alwways eat meal without her presence. Thus, this situation leads to a gap between herself and family and a lack of loving upbringing of the children from her.

To sum up, people are too crazy with career and do not get along well explains why family time is reduced. It can give rise to a person insensity to one another due to the blank that is created when people do not have a tendency to eat together anymore.

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Today, the more the world is developing, (?? The world has always been developing, even in antiquity.) the more likely people are to gather around the table and eat together. (You have stated the opposite of the topic statement.) There are a great amount of reasons behind this change and problems that need to considering. (wrong form)

To begin with, no one can deny that people are more engaged with work and study than those in the past; so much that they forget the existence of each member in the family. They have to complete unlimited (Exaggeration) tasks under pressure and a chievements; therefore, meal time is no longer crucial to them because they have to spend every single second (Exaggeration) to finish. More seriously, some families always have conflicts with money, kids, marriage and other similar things, so it is difficult for them to join the meals with others. As a result, the times people spend time with each other in at meals gradually decreases and one day, it will permanently (Exaggeration) disappear.

Consequently, several reasons above the lack of attention to the family contributes to lessening the love and making a distance between people. They will not care about each other if they keep being busy and hurting others. (??) Futhermore, they will become more and more emotionless. For example, when a woman spends most of her time in workplace, that she does not have time to cook. It means that her husband and children alwways eat meal (wrong form) without her presence. Thus, this situation leads to a gap between herself and family and a lack of a loving upbringing of the children from her.

To sum up, people are too crazy involved with their careers and do not get along well explains why family time is reduced. (ungrammatical) It can give rise to a person (wrong form) insensity to one another due to the blank (wrong word) that is created when people do not have a tendency to eat together anymore.

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