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Dear teachers ,

Please edit my application for unpaid leave of absence below :

APPLICATION FOR UNPAID LEAVE OF ABSENCE

To : The Management of A CHAU GRAPHIC DESIGN CO.,LTD
Dear sirs ,

I , the undersigned N TV , who is now working as a silk screen worker for the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request your permission to take three months’ unpaid leave /three months of unpaid leave ( Starting from May 1st till/through July 31st , 2007 ).

Reason for leave of absence : visiting my family abroad.

I will return to work after coming back from abroad.

Thank you very much for your assistance in this matter./Thank you very much for your consideration .

Ho Chi Minh City dated ....

Respectfully yours

Thank you in advance




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To : The Management of A CHAU GRAPHIC DESIGN CO.,LTD
Dear Sirs ,

I , Mary Smith, the undersigned N TV(what does this mean?) and currently employed as a silk screen worker in the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request permission to take a three month leave of absence beginning May 1st through July 31st , 2007 .

The reason for the request is to visit my family abroad.

Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter.

Ho Chi Minh City dated ..

Respectfully yours



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Keep it short. Employers don't like to let people leave for 3 months and then expect to get their job back. You might add that "I have not seen my family in over X years." to get some sympathy for the leave.


Hi ,

I think " I , the undersigned NTV ,..." is ok . NTV here is the proper name of the applicant.In my opinion ,we should say:

Dear Sirs ,

I , the undersigned NTV , currently being a silk screen worker in the silk screen printing workshop of your company , respectfully request permission to take a three month leave of absence beginning May 1st through July 31st , 2007 .

The reason for the request is to visit my family abroad.

Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter.

Ho Chi Minh City dated ..

Respectfully yours

Best wishes