Grateful if you could please do necessary correction in the text below. Thanks a lot in advance for your time and work.

Dear

Yes, there are limited desktops but we can give two laptops (total 20 laptops) with docking stations plus few monitors to each schools (10 requests). These all are public schools that are mostly in isolated locations. Only two public schools are from the city areas. All these school are operated by Nepali government where students from low income family are studied.

2) There are some broken/scrap equipment but we don't give them unless they request. One school is interested to take the scrap items. This would be used in their lab for computer education.

3) List below is the allocation of IT equipment to each schools.
<list goes here>

Grateful if you could approve the list. Thank you.

Regards, M
Hi Team,

I have changed few words/lines myself. I would appreciate your another look and please correct my draft email below. Please also fell free add or delete text if you want. Thank you for your support.

Draft
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Dear

Apology for giving insufficient information in my email earlier.

Yes, there are limited old desktops whereas we can offer two laptops (total 20 laptops) with docking stations plus few monitors to each schools (10 requests). These all are public schools that are mostly located in isolated areas from main cities. Only two public schools are from the city areas. All these school are operated by Nepali government where students from low income family are studied.

2) There are some broken/scrap equipment but we don't donate these unless they request. One of the schools is interested to use the scrap items in their lab for computer education.

3) List below is a purposed allocation of IT equipment to each of the schools.
<list goes here>

We would be grateful if you could review and approve the list. Thank you.

Dear Sector Coordinators,


Slam,

As we commit ourselves to submitting the Gantt Chart of our respective sectors; thus until now, I have received only two Gantt one from FFA, and the other from PBP (UNHCR/P1/ Umshallay).

Nothing has been received from; Health [email protected], Nutrition [email protected], WASH [email protected], and FSL [email protected] While PBP has [email protected] FFA has submitted his won [email protected]


*The Gantt Chart is one of our daily tools; ignoring it means that we implementing the activities without plans and not managing our staff effectively.

*since last week, I have been remaining, and engorging you to send it; but I realized you are not responding to me. Therefore, I will let the Program Director and your Sector managers decide.

*The below table shows the submission status.