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Hi

In two week I will have english exam for writing. OK. In writing exam I will have write two thinks: email and note.

1. Email: answer email

2. Note: Write job note [memo? ]

I will glad if you point my mistake: grammar

Now I write answer email:


Hi Bruce

I'm very happy you are wirte to me. I change job and now I working as quality engineer. You heard very well I sold my old car and bought new. Old car was very often broke down and I decided buy new. The new car is awesome. It's VW Passat B8 he has 200 hourse power. Top speed is 350 km per hour. My new car is all black. Cost me 20000 dollars. About treap to the sea I have another plans on this long weekend. I want go to the my father and show him my new car. We can go to the mountains in another time. Next week will be ok. We can took my young brother Lukas. He never saw the mountains.


All the best, Tanis20

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In two weeks I will have an English exam for writing. OK. In the writing exam, I will have to write two things: an email and a note.

You have made a lot of errors.

Hi Bruce

I'm very happy you are wirte (wrong form) to me. I change (wrong form) job (wrong form) and now I working (wrong form) as (missing word) quality engineer. You heard very well that I sold my old car and bought new. (wrong usage ) (missing word) Old car was very often broke (wrong form) down and I decided (missing word) buy new. (wrong usage ) The new car is awesome. It's (missing word) VW Passat B8 he has 200 hourse power. (missing word) Top speed is 350 km per hour. My new car is all black. (missing word) Cost me 20000 dollars. About treap to the sea (missing punctuation) I have another plans (wrong form) on (wrong word) this long weekend. I want go to the my father and show him my new car. We can go to the mountains in (wrong word) another time. Next week will be ok. We can took (wrong form) my young brother Lukas. He never saw (wrong form) the mountains.

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I corrected email ;] I hope is good now. 

But I don't know why "in another time" is wrong form. "at another time" is correctly?



Hi Bruce

I'm very happy you are wirted to me. I changed work and now I work as quality engineer. You heard that I sold my old car and bought new. My old car was very often broking down and I decided to buy new car. The new car is awesome. It's VW Passat B8 car has 200 hourse power. Top speed is 350 km per hour. My new car is all black. Cost me 20000 dollars. About treap to the sea I have another plans for this long weekend. I want go to my father and show him my new car. We can go to the mountains at another time. Next week will be ok. We can took my young brother Lukas. He never seen the mountains.

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Tanis20But I don't know why "in another time" is the wrong form. Is "at another time" correct?

Yes.

You still have many errors.

MW = missing word

Hi Bruce

I'm very happy you are wirted to me. I changed work (the previous version had the correct word - job - but the wrong form of the word.) and now I work as (mw) quality engineer. You heard that I sold my old car and bought new. My old car was very often broking down and I decided to buy (mw) new car. The new car is awesome. It's (mw) VW Passat B8 car (mw) has 200 hourse power. (What is a hourse?) (mw) Top speed is 350 km per hour. My new car is all black. (mw) Cost me 20000 dollars. About (mw) treap to the sea, I have another plans for this long weekend. I want (mw) go to my father and show him my new car. We can go to the mountains at another time. Next week will be ok. We can took my young brother Lukas. He (mw) never seen the mountains.

New version ;] I hope it's ok now.


Hi Bruce

I'm very happy you are write to me. I change my job and now I working as quality engineer. You heard that I sold my old car and bought newone. My old car was very often broking down and I decided to buy newone car. The new car is awesome. It's VW Passat B8. This car has 200 horsepower. Top speed is 350 km per hour. My newone car is all black. Cost me 20000 dollars. About trip to the sea, I have another plans for this long weekend. I want to go my father and show him my newone car. We can go to the mountains at another time. Next week will be ok. We can take my young brother Lukas. He (mw) never seen before at the mountains.

Tanis20New version ;] I hope it's ok now.

It's worse! There is no such word as "newone." I have given you several corrections.

I'm very happy you are writing (Use the progressive form!) to me. I change my job changed (past tense. You already did it) jobs (Plural. There are 2 jobs - your old one and your new one.) and now I working (Use the progressive form!) as a quality engineer. You heard that I sold my old car and bought newone. My old car was very often broking (spelling error) down and I decided to buy newone car . The new car is awesome. It's a VW Passat B8. This car has 200 horsepower. Its top speed is 350 km per hour. My newone car is all black. It cost me 20000 dollars. About the trip to the sea, I have another plans (another is singular; plans is plural. They don't match) for this long weekend. I want to go (missing word) my father and show him my newone car. We can go to the mountains at another time. Next week will be ok. We can take my young brother Lukas. He (missing word) never seen before at the mountains.

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These sentences are correct? You have marked the word "newone" in yellow.

You heard that I sold my old car and bought newone. I decided to buy newone car .


I have another plans (another is singular; plans is plural. They don't match) -I suppose I should use "schemes"? "


Thank you for your help.

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