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Hi All,
I am looking for some help to improve my email writing skills.

I work as a IT support Engineer and interacting with end users on a daily basis to solve their issues. Here i have few questions on how to use Please / Kindly ... Using "?" mark in the email sentence.

Please correct the below few sentences.....

Please update us the status at the earliest.

Could you please check and let us know if you still face any issues ?

Could you please share the below requested details ?

Would request you to share the below requested details at the earliest.

Please schedule a session at your convenient time to take the debug logs.

Would request you to please share the below details to assist you further on this.

Could you please update the status on this, so we can resolve the ticket?

Best Regards,
Ranjith Asam
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AnonymousI work as an IT support engineer and interact ing with end users on a daily basis to resolve their issues. Here, I have a few questions on how to use "please" / Kindly ... Using "?" and the question mark in the email sentences.
AnonymousPlease correct the below following few sentences.
or
AnonymousPlease correct the below few sentences below.
AnonymousPlease update us on the status of the project at the earliest.
AnonymousCould you please check and let us know if whether you're still facing any issues?
AnonymousCould you please share the below requested provide the following details?
AnonymousWould request you to share the below requested please provide the following details at the earliest?
AnonymousPlease schedule a session at your convenient a time convenient to you to take the debug logs.
I don't know what "take the debug logs" means. If this is IT jargon, then it's fine.
AnonymousWould request you to Please share provide the below following details so we can to assist you further on with this matter.
AnonymousCould you please update us on the status on of this issue so we can resolve it? the ticket?
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please update us on the below mail at the earlierst.