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Dear Tony!

How have the family been? I hope you’re well and looking forward to your trip to Viet Nam. I’ll be on holiday when you come, so I have got plenty of time to spend with you. I will definitely show you some places of interest during your time in Ho Chi Minh City. As for a beach cities, I highly recommend Mui Ne as the worthiest place to visit.

The cheapest and easiest way to get to my apartment from the airport by the bus. It takes you five hours to get Mui Ne from City by bus. For the accommodation, the services available here variety from 5-star resorts to guesthouse . You can book at Traveloka or Agoda for a better price and advance reservation. Two most popular activities are enjoying local specialities and buying seafood such as crab, fish, octopus. Besides, you can join activities on the beach like kites-flying, go swimming, surfing, jet-skiing, beach parachuting. In addition, you can spend most of the day relaxing in my hotel and having breakfast in bed.

Well, that is all for now, Pen Pal. When you have a moment, drop me a line and confirm your flight and arrival times. I’m sure you’ll have a great time here.

See you soon,

Thanh

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