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I'm writing a motivation letter and I'm afraid that the grammar is horrible. Please help me correct them if you find any mistakes

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my interest in the Exchange program at ..University. I am a third year student studying International Relations at the .... Studying Political Science at .... University is an opportunity I would love to dedicate myself too wholeheartedly, as it would contribute to my development as a specialist in the best possible way.


I cannot say that the field of International Relations was something that I choose. In retrospect, it is easy to see that I have always been curious about it. When I was seven years old, I asked a question that made my father laugh: „If Harry Potter is so powerful, that he defeted Volant de Mort, can he defet corruption in Ukraine?” And ten years later I found myself at the best University in Ukraine, knowing enough about economy, politics and Them-whose-names-must-not-be-spoken to answer this question.

As I was growing up, there were more questions. But I started to take little steps to solve them, instead of just asking. I am a human rights activist, public figure of Youtube and students’ community, and a teacher. I have already done something for social improvement of my community as a member of NGOs like Amnesty International, Care in Action and Caritas and as an educator. My team organized free tutorship for deprived children, art exhibitions and collected money for charity. During the quarantine, I developed and filmed a General English Course delivering 64 lessons right in pupils’ homes. My summer internship in the Ministry of Infrastructure made me realize how much satisfaction I derive from work at large institutions. This experience also helped me to develop some valuable skills, such as project cycle management, effective public speaking, cross-cultural communications, presentation and writing skills.

As I worked, volunteered and studied, I spoke to different people, from Ambassadors to homeless persons. I discovered how little things made human’s life great or miserable. And I would like to be this positive change as long as there are questions to be answered.

Studying Political Science at ... University is an opportunity I would like to grab with both hands, and I hope that during my stay there, I will be able to contribute to the community in the best way that I can.

Thank you for considering my application.

Yours faithfully,

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