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Today, social platforms bring a lot of benefits to life, including Facebook and Twitter. Young people get used to scrolling the social application sites. I believe that will bring less advantages than disadvantages for people.

There are some benefits of using social media sites. Firstly, almost all social media sites can bring people together with ease. Communicating with relatives is convenient and fast when we use social media to connect. For instance, if we want to talk with your foreign friends, you can video call on social networks. Also, we can interact with people by commenting on their posts.


Secondly, some drawbacks can be seen in using social networks. If you use social media too much, you will reduce self-discipline and not focus on working. It leads to creating distance between family members.

In conclusion, social media has some positive aspects for life. I personally believe that advantages of using social network

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Which test are you practising for, and what was the exact question for the above essay?

It's writing for ielts

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You haven't answered the second part of the question.

What was the question/prompt/instruction for the above essay?

Question: Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience ( about 250 words)

That prompt is incomplete! It does not give any instruction. It's missing something like:

What do you think?

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Do you agree with either of those views, and to what extent?

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Discuss both views and give your own.

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You said that I have to discuss both view and give my own opinion. I don't understand. I have discussed both advantages and disadvantages, give my opinion that I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages in the introduction and conclusion. So I not sure what you said?

I have to finish this essay on tomorrow morning so I don't have much time left. I really hope you to correct my essay

Minh AnYou said that I have to discuss both view and give my own opinion.

No, I didn't say that. I said that one possibility was that the question might include that. Anyway, not to worry.

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Today, social media platforms bring a lot of benefits to life, including such as Facebook and Twitter have become very popular with users all over the world. Young people, especially, are fond of get used to scrolling through those social application sites. However, some argue that these online platforms do more harm than good, particularly when it comes to social interaction. I believe that will bring less fewer advantages than disadvantages for people.

On the one hand, there are some benefits of using associated with social media sites. Firstly, almost all social media sites can bring people together with ease and convenience. Communicating with relatives is convenient and fast, easy, and free when we use social media to connect. For instance, if we want to talk with your foreign friends overseas, you we can video call them on any one of many social networks. Also, we can interact with people by commenting on their posts.

Secondly, Nevertheless, social media platforms are also associated with some drawbacks. can be seen in using social networks. First, they can be addictive. If you use social media too much, you will reduce self-discipline be distracted and not focus on work or study tasks. ing. Moreover, it is a well-documented phenomenon that online social media It leads to creating promote distance between people, even between family members. It is not uncommon at all nowadays to see several people, even family members or friends, sitting in the same room, each typing away on their smartphone, tablet, or laptop, and no one talking.

In conclusion, although social media facilitate online virtual communication and enable people separated by great geographical distances to stay in tough with each other, they can also hinder real social interaction and reduce real personal communication. has some positive aspects for life. I personally believe that advantages of using social network

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