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Once upon a time, there was a fox lived in the forest. one day he is very hungry and looking something to eat. He went around the forest and he saw a crow biting a cheese on a tree.

Then an evil idea occurred to the fox's mind. “oh crow if your voice half as beautiful as those fine feathers I see, it would please my ears to hear you sing a little melody!” said the fox. The crow start singing and didn’t realized that the cheese is falling. The fox catch it and start eat it.

when the crow has finished singing the crowd realize that the cheese fell. “Oh, no! You’ve stolen my dinner” said the crow. “Not at all! You got the compliments, and I got the cheese!” said the fox as he walks away.


please check my sentences, thankyou!

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Every sentence must begin with a capital letter.

Once upon a time, there was a fox who lived in the forest. one day he is (wrong verb form) very hungry and looking something to eat. He went around the forest and he saw a crow in a tree eating a piece of cheese. biting a cheese on a tree.

Then an evil idea occurred to the fox. 's mind. “oh crow if your voice half as beautiful as those fine feathers I see, it would please my ears to hear you sing a little melody!” said the fox. The crow start (wrong verb form) singing and didn’t realized (wrong verb form) that he had dropped the cheese is falling. The fox catch (wrong verb form) it and start (wrong verb form) eat (wrong verb form) it.

when the crow has finished singing the crowd realize (wrong verb form) that the cheese fell. (wrong verb form) “Oh, no! You’ve stolen my dinner” said the crow. “Not at all! You got the compliments, and I got the cheese!” said the fox as he walks (wrong verb form) away.