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is i hope my request would be considered correct?

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I hope my request will be considered favourably.

will be, not would be, because you want it to actually be considered.

The pronoun I is always a capital letter.

If they are reading your request, they are considering it. What you want is a favourable decision.

Active voice is better than Passive voice,

ie I hope you will consider my request favourably.