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In this assign I have to identify the pronouns, adverbs and adjectives. I have been out of school for atleast 12 yrs. If anyone is willing your help is appreciated. I wrote this paragraph. this is my assignment check my paragraph thanks. my last grade wasn't so good thats why im here trying.

· Write several sentences describing a recent interaction with a friend or family member about personal finance or credit cards. This interaction may be imagined or real.

· Use at least five different pronouns, adverbs, and adjectives in your sentences.

· Identify all pronouns used by italicizing them.

· Bold each adverb.

· Underline each adjective.

· Compare the event to one or more similar events. When comparing, use at least three comparatives and three superlatives.

My mother quickly calls me back when she receives my voicemail. We talk about how to finance my mission trip to Homa Bay, Kenya. I convey to her that my MasterCard could finance a fragment of the trip cost. While in Kenya I would be preaching in a Christian crusade to save souls. She inquired about my traveling arrangements with the Christian Organization. In our closing conversation I explain in details the layout of my trip to Kenya. She stated that using credit cards is borrowing debit. To wait and save enough money to pay for the trip with cash will leave no worries.
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1-- You missed italicizing at least 3 pronouns.

2-- You missed at least one adverb. (If you were supposed to include 5 EACH of pronouns, adjectives and adverbs, then you need 3 more adverbs, as I can only find two altogether.)

3--You missed at least 8 adjectives.

4-- I have struck through errors of selection and spelling below.

5-- You have not included the sentence(s) of comparison.

My mother quickly calls me back when she receives my voicemail. We talk about how to finance my mission trip to Homa Bay, Kenya. I convey to her that my MasterCard could finance a fragment of the trip cost. While in Kenya I would be preaching in a Christian crusade to save souls. She inquired about my traveling arrangements with the Christian Organization. In our closing conversation, I explain in details the layout of my trip to Kenya. She stated that using credit cards is borrowing debit. To wait and save enough money to pay for the trip with cash will leave no worries.