IT applications are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
Using IT software in education had been increasing in recent years. It is often argued that this is conducive spread whilst others disagree and think it will damage to the young generations. I believe that technology will be a valuable tool for the development of future education. This essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, there are many students, and lectures have enhanced the information researching ability. They enable us to find several electronic books on the internet instead of the paper one in the traditional library. For example, the learner types some keywords in Wikipedia and can pick up any article related to their need. Furthermore, online documents help users to eliminate the time of researching. Google is one of the most popular webs in the world that can give searching results within a short time.
On the other side of the coin, Students will become independent on using the application for corrections in the studying process. Their assignment is no longer personal because these applications take a hand in plagiarism. Quillbot is a perfect example, Quillbot is used to paraphrase any sentence, paragraph or article. No matter how they unintentionally plagiarise, they will get into trouble about copyright.
In conclusion, while the advantages of technology, particularly the internet, allow students to improve their knowledge researching in convenient ways, some still feel that people should be cautious of this new phenomenon and should not allow it to depend on technology in every case. However, I believe that technology plays a pivotal role in the development of studying and teaching.
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Using IT software ("IT software" does not make any sense. All software needs a computer to operate. Just "software") ) in education had (wrong tense) been increasing in recent years. It is often argued that this is conducive spread (That is not good English.) Many believe this is a positive development and urge it to continue, whilst others disagree and think it will inhibit the learning process for students. damage to the young generations. (That really is not good. ) I believe that computing technology is will be a valuable tool for the development of future approaches to education. This essay will discuss both views. (Do not copy the prompt to your opening paragraph. )
On the one hand, there are many students, and lectures have enhanced the information researching ability. (The topic is about software, not teachers or their lectures.) They (The lectures that professors give? How can a lecture on, for example, English Grammar, do this?) enable us to find several electronic books on the internet instead of the paper one in the traditional library. For example, the learner types some keywords in Wikipedia (Don't you mean the search box?) and can pick up any article related to their need. Furthermore, online documents help users to eliminate the time of researching. Google is one of the most popular webs (Google is not a web.) in the world that can give searching results within a short time. (I do not understand your point. You are not using vocabulary words correctly. )
On the other side of the coin, (wrong transition phrase - You were writing about electronic searches. "The other side" is going to a traditional library and using paper.)) Students (wrong capitalization. "Student" is not a proper noun.) will become independent on using the application (I do not know what you mean. If they are independent of Google, it means that they do not need Google at all. Do you mean that students do not need any computers or applications?) for corrections (I do not understand "corrections" ) in the studying process. Their assignment is no longer personal (I am completely confused. Won't the teachers give any individual assignments or homework?) because these applications take a hand in plagiarism. Quillbot is a perfect example, (Comma splice error) Quillbot is used to paraphrase any sentence, paragraph or article. No matter how they (Who?) unintentionally plagiarise, they will get into trouble about copyright. (I do not understand. A copyright gives ownership rights to the composer or author of music or a book.
In conclusion, while the advantages of technology, (The topic is about software, not general technology) particularly the internet, allow students to improve their knowledge researching (wrong usage) in convenient ways, some still feel that people should be cautious of this new phenomenon (wrong word) and should not allow it (what?) to depend on technology in every case. However, I believe that technology plays a pivotal role in the development of studying and teaching. (You did not make any points about development of studying or teaching.)
I am sorry, but I could not understand most of this essay. Many vocabulary words were not used correctly, inhibiting communication. Since I could not follow the logic of the arguments, it lacked cohesion and coherence.
IT applications are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.
Using IT software in education had been increasing in recent years. It is often argued that this is conducive spread whilst others disagree and think it will damage to the young generations. I believe that technology will be a valuable tool for the development of future education. This essay will discuss both views.
On the one hand, there are many students, and lectures have enhanced the information researching ability. They enable us to find several electronic books on the internet instead of the paper one in the traditional library. For example, the learner types some keywords in Wikipedia and can pick up any article related to their need. Furthermore, online documents help users to eliminate the time of researching. Google is one of the most popular webs in the world that can give searching results within a short time.
On the other side of the coin, Students will become independent on using the application for corrections in the studying process. Their assignment is no longer personal because these applications take a hand in plagiarism. Quillbot is a perfect example, Quillbot is used to paraphrase any sentence, paragraph or article. No matter how they unintentionally plagiarise, they will get into trouble about copyright.
In conclusion, while the advantages of technology, particularly the internet, allow students to improve their knowledge researching in convenient ways, some still feel that people should be cautious of this new phenomenon and should not allow it to depend on technology in every case. However, I believe that technology plays a pivotal role in the development of studying and teaching.
Thank you so much. It seems like I am in trouble with logic and word choice.