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TOPIC: In many developing countries, there is a problem with the declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. what measures could be taken to prevent this?


People believe that nations can not make breakthroughs without harming the environment. Air and water contamination caused by industry and construction is at an alarming rate these days. However, this phenomenon could be tackled by implementing several approaches.


It is possibly said that this issue may be triggered by some main factors. One of the prominent reasons concerning this problem is industrial activities. This is because developing countries have the propensity for concentrating on heavy industry to reinforce the national economy while not having enough finance to apply eco-friendly equipment and technologies in the production process, which inevitably results in negative impacts on the environment such as CO2 emission or poisonous sewage. The “Formosa Ha Tinh Steel” company, whose chimneys discharged extremely polluted smoke without decontamination, is a typical case.


In truth, some multi-faceted measures ought to be taken to address this problem. Promulgating laws and levying high taxes on producing processes is highly recommended. In particular, companies or businesses that discharge waste chemicals into oceans should be punished by the government. In addition, it is significant to appeal to developed countries for financial assistance. Henceforth, businesses could apply modern technologies to minimize the negative impacts on the environment. Another feasible solution is changing the consuming behaviors of consumers. To clarify, people should be in favor of products which were produced in an eco-friendly way. Whereby, industrial giants may be responsible for decontaminating waste and emissions if they still want to satisfy the public.


In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding air and water pollution, yet, they can be solved once those measures are enlisted imperatively.

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People believe that nations can not make breakthroughs without harming the environment. (That has nothing to do with the topic. You must focus exactly on the task and its instructions.) Air and water contamination caused by industry and construction is increasing at an alarming rate these days. However, this phenomenon (wrong word) could be tackled by implementing several approaches. (Vague. It could apply to anything. We do not implement an approach, but a solution. You did not mention "developing countries", an important part of the task, in your first paragraph.)

It is possibly said that this issue may be triggered by some main factors. (That is not only poor English, it has no content. Everything in the entire world has some causes. You need to avoid these vacuous sentences. And "possibly said" is very odd. Either someone says it, or they don't. )

One of the prominent reasons for concerning this problem is industrial activities without any environmental controls. This is because Developing countries have significant amounts of the propensity for concentrating on heavy industry to reinforce the national economy while not having any regulations requiring enough finance to apply eco-friendly equipment and technologies in the production process, which inevitably results in negative impacts on the environment resulting from such as CO2 emissions or toxic waste effluents. poisonous sewage. The “Formosa Ha Tinh Steel” company, whose chimneys discharged extremely polluted smoke without decontamination, is a typical case.


In truth, some multi-faceted There are a variety of measures that ought to be taken to address this problem. Promulgating laws and levying high taxes on companies and factories that pollute producing processes is highly recommended. In particular, companies or businesses that discharge waste chemicals into oceans should be punished by the government. In addition, it is significant to appeals can be made to developed countries for financial assistance. Henceforth, businesses could apply modern technologies to minimize the negative impacts on the environment. Another feasible solution is changing the consuming behaviors of consumers. To clarify, In particular, people should be in favor of products which were produced in an eco-friendly way. Whereby, They should lobby the government and petition the industrial giants to be more may be responsible for decontaminating waste and emissions. If that does not work, they can buy products made by environmentally-conscious companies and boycott ones made by the worst polluters. if they still want to satisfy the public.


In conclusion, there are indeed various repercussions regarding air and water pollution, yet, they can be solved once those measures regulations are enacted and people insist on eco-friendly products.. enlisted imperatively.