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To live in a world inhabited by science and technology, it is indeed imperstive that we learn the basics or at least the gist of idea how science and technology make the world go round, it is science and technology that helped pave the way in changing this world into a successfuly blooming industry. As far as one's eye can see, science and technology really have a lot to offer us and whether or not you like it, every step we take in this vast world is dogged not only by science but also by technology; the gadgets that we use in this very moment, and thousands of cures for malignant diseases invented by highly intelligent people are something that we owe to science and technology, without these, I can hardly imagine how this world would be-- it might fall or be on the verge of collapse, and the outcome hinges entirely on how we're going to move.

Can anyone tell me if my work has any errors?

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anonymousCan anyone tell me if my work has any errors?

Yes. It has errors.