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Forests are the lungs of the Earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to the death of the world we currently know.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued whether deforestation incur tons of detrimental effects on our planet. In my view, I totally agree with this notion as the more trees cut down, the more carbon dioxide emitted into the environment leading to ferocious climate change, additionally, the deficit of natural habitat is also caused. This essay will discuss every aspect of this nagging issue.

The first problem arisen by the activity of accumulating wood for various supplements for human’s needs is that the climate change. In fact, forests burnt will certainly lead to an enormous amount of carbon emissions. This is one of the main causes of global warming irritating human’s life contemporarily. The environment will experience greenhouse effect, ice melting at two poles which will probably raise sea level causing death to many coastal areas.

Another consequence that wild animals have to face due to the forest destruction is the loss of their living environment. Owing to the shrink of tree coverage, the ecosystem will extremely suffer, as a result animals will have no alternative but to end up becoming extinct. Unfortunately, the balance of the environment will be lost.

However, many have supposed that forest extraction is paramount for our lives as we are making most of the world’s forests in order to provide the population with wood for a variety of purposes in terms of agriculture, building construction and other industries. But this can be replaced by a number of environmentally-friendly materials which scientists these days are making efforts to invent.

In conclusion, it is undeniable that deforestation has posed a threat to the survival of both human and animals as it will bring about extreme weather conditions as well as natural habitat loss. Given this situation, it is high time governments and citizens took actions so as to reduce forest exploitation, therefore mitigating its destructive impacts on the Earth.

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It is argued whether deforestation incur tons of (Casual. This is not an academic expression. ) detrimental effects on our planet. In my view, I totally agree with this notion as the more trees cut down, the more carbon dioxide is emitted (Actually, it is "less carbon dioxide is absorbed".) into the environment leading to ferocious climate change, (Comma splice error, ungrammatical) additionally, the deficit (wrong word) of natural habitat is destroyed. is also caused. This essay will discuss every aspect of this nagging issue. (Nagging means that is is not serious, only mildly annoying. The statement is that deforestation will mean the end to most of the life on earth.)

(Do not mention your essay. The examiner knows you are writing an essay. Do not tell them what they know already.)


The first problem arisen (wrong verb form) arising from by the activity of accumulating wood (That is not the topic. It is cutting trees down.) for various supplements (Wrong word ) for human’s our needs is that the climate change. (wrong verb form) In fact, forests burnt (The topic is not burning down the trees, it is harvesting them. You have to explain what you mean here.) will certainly lead to an enormous amount of carbon emissions. This is one of the main causes of global warming irritating human’s life contemporarily. (poor English - irritate is to annoy. It is very mild and is not long-lasting. ) The environment will experience greenhouse effect, (The greenhouse effect is the property of certain gasses such as carbon dioxide. It is not an experience. ) When large amounts of greenhouses gasses are released into the atmosphere, it is like putting a blanket over the earth; it gets warmer. ice m Melting ice in the Antarctic and Greenland at two poles which will probably raise sea levels causing death to many coastal areas to be flooded.

Another consequence that wild animals have to face due to the forest destruction is the loss of their natural habitats. living environment. Owing to the shrink (shrink is a verb, not a noun) of tree coverage, the ecosystem will extremely suffer, as a result many species of animals will become have no alternative but to end up becoming extinct. Unfortunately, the balance of nature the environment will be lost.

However, many have supposed that forest extraction (Wrong word ) is paramount for our lives as we are making (Wrong word ) most of the world’s forests in order to provide the population with wood for a variety of purposes such as paper, furniture, in terms of agriculture, building construction and other industries. But this can be replaced by a number of environmentally-friendly materials which scientists these days are making efforts to invent. (Off-topic. )

In conclusion, it is undeniable that deforestation has posed a threat to the survival of both human (Wrong form)and animals as it will bring about extreme weather conditions (you did not mention this point in your body paragraphs.) as well as natural habitat loss. Given this situation, it is high time governments and citizens took actions so as to reduce forest exploitation, therefore mitigating its destructive impacts on the Earth. (Off-topic. The task did not ask you for any recommendation or solution. You must keep focus only on the task.)