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Hello,
I am a student from Slovakia and I would like to work at summer camp in the USA with programme Work And Travel. I am completing the registration and one of questions is autobiographical essay. it should be only about 1/2 page in length.
Could anybody check my essay (grammer and so on) and give me some guidance what is wrong and what i should add please?

I am looking forward to your answer.

Here it is

My name is Jan, and I was born in January 1988 in Slovakia. I live with my parents in a small village in the east Slovakia. After I finished elementary school I began to study on secondary engineering school. When I was 18 I have been in England during summer holidays. I have worked in coffee bar at Manchester airport as a dishwasher and table cleaner. In short time I have learned how to make different kinds of coffees and began to serve the customers. My day started very early because I had to be at work at 3:30 am. I have been there first because I had to brought stocks from store and prepare display with food. After one of my colleagues came we opened for customers. I have met many new friends from different nations and cultures. Manager of our unit has been very friendly and we have had very good relations. After summer holidays I have gone back to my country to finished secondary school. During hollidays between seccondary school and university I went again to the England to work there. It repeated totally for four years. During this period I have worked at different positions involved in restaurant services from dishwashing, through serving customers to food preparation. I have studied at Technical University of Kosice in the study programme of Computer Aided Mechanical Engineering Production in the study field of Manufacturing technologies. I gained the academic degree of bachelor. In the present I am studying the second level of university studies in the study programme of Automation and control equipments and processes. I spend a lot of my free time with my friends. We do some sport as soccer or volleyball or just talking together. I like fun and I have sense of humor . I like making trips into the nature, listening to a music, surfing the internet, watching TV and so on. I would like to work at summer camp because I think it is a very good oportunity to gain new experiences, meet new friends, improve my english and see the style of american life.
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My name is Jan, and I was born in January 1988 in Slovakia. I live with my parents in a small village in the east Slovakia. After I finished elementary school, I began to study in a on secondary engineering school. When I was 18, I went to have been in England during summer holidays. I have worked in a coffee bar at Manchester airport as a dishwasher and table cleaner. In a short time I have learned how to make different kinds of coffees and began to serve the customers. My day started very early because I had to be at work at 3:30 am. I had to be have been there first because I had to bring brought stocks from the storeroom store and prepare the display with food. After one of my colleagues came (arrived might be better), we opened for customers. I have met many new friends from different nations and cultures. The manager of our unit was has been very friendly and we have had very good relations(use present perfect if you are still working there). After the summer holidays I have gone went back to my country to finish finished secondary school. During the holidays hollidays between seccondary school and university, I went again to the England to work there. It repeated totally I did that each year for four years. During this period, I have worked at different positions involved in restaurant services ranging from dishwashing, through serving customers to food preparation. I have studied at the Technical University of Kosice in the study programme of Computer Aided Mechanical Engineering Production in the study field of manufacturing technologies. I gained the academic degree of bachelor. I earned my bachelor's degree. At the present time, I am in studying the second level of university studies in the study programme of automation and control equipment equipments and processes. I spend a lot of my free time with my friends. We play do some sports such as soccer or volleyball or just talk talking together. I like fun and I have sense of humor . I like making trips into the nature, listening to a music, surfing the internet, watching TV and so on. I would like to work at summer camp because I think it would be is a very good opportunity to gain new experiences, meet new friends, improve my English and see the style of American life.
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Thank you very much for your help. I appreciate it and I think it's much better now.
Regards.