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Traveling by bicycle is a good way that I have ever tried. When I was sixteen, I used my bicycle to travel across Kon Tum city. There are reasons why I love traveling by bike. Firstly, I come to the places that I would never have seen without a plan. This helps me free and flexible. Secondly, I am the whole day in nature. The winds bows around my nose. I listen to the birds chirp. I stop to fill my stomatch. That's really great. It is good for your health to travel by bike. It produces happiness hormones and helps relaxing so you can sleep deeper and better. Many cyclists hapy about the fact that they can eat so much and everything they want during a tour without gaining weight. I am pretty prefer traveling by bicycle because it gives me memorable experiences. It also helps me keep fit my body and keep my mind fresh. Someday I will invite my friends to travel together by bicycle.
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Essay Instructions: Write a paragraph about what it is like to ride a bicycle. Write at least 100 words.


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Traveling by bicycle is a good way (wrong form. You must use a superlative with the following clause.) that I have ever tried. When I was sixteen, I used my bicycle to travel across Kon Tum city. There are reasons why I love traveling by bike. Firstly, First, I come (wrong word) to the places that I would never have seen without a plan. This helps me free and flexible. (ungrammatical. Missing verb) Secondly, Second, I am spend the whole day in nature. The winds bows (wrong word) around me. my nose. I listen to the birds chirp. I stop to fill my stomatch. That's really great. It is good for your health to travel by bike. It produces happiness hormones and helps relaxing (wrong usage, wrong form) so you can sleep deeper and better. Many cyclists hapy (ungrammatical. Missing verb, wrong spelling) about the fact that they can eat so much and everything they want during a tour without gaining weight. I am pretty prefer (ungrammatical verb) traveling by bicycle because it gives me memorable experiences. It also helps me keep fit my body (ungrammatical word order) and keep my mind fresh. Someday I will invite my friends to travel with me together by bicycle.