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Hi guys heres my essay, i translated it from Chinese.

please correct my mistake. Thanks Emotion: smile

Most of Chines Folk Festivals are basis of four seasons-Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, “Spring Festval” had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the Lunar Chinese new year, which has 3000 years history.

Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China’s folks festivals.

For thougsands of years, as the Lunar years ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year’s harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.

When the twelfth month of the lunar year come, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.

The 23rd day of the last lunar month is an annual worshipping kitchen Day, this is the major festival in the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every family’s houseworks, and it is said that, when he returns to heaven, the speech he has made will determine one family’s coming fortune and misfortune.

New years eve is on 30th day of the last lunar month, people started get busy since they got up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging New Year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.
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First, please go through your translation and check the spellings and capitalizations. Then re-post and I will point out your other errors.
Most of Chines folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festval" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chinese New Year, which has 3000 years history.

Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festivals.

For thousands of years, as the lunar years ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year's harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.

When the twelfth month of the lunar year come, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.

The 23rd day of the last lunar month is an annual worshipping Kitchen Day, this is the major festival in the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every family's houseworks, and it is said that, when he returns to heaven, the speech he has made will determine one family's coming fortune, weal and woe.

New Years Eve is on 30th of the last lunar month, people started get busy once they got up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging new year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.

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Try again, and more carefully this time-- you've spelt Chinese and festival 2 ways in just your first paragraph.
Most of Chinese folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festival" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chinese New Year, which has 3000 years history.

Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festivals.

For thousands of years, as the lunar years ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year's harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.

When the twelfth month of the lunar year come, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.

The 23rd day of the last lunar month is an annual worshipping Kitchen Day, this is the major festival in the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every family's
houseworks, and it is said that, when he returns to heaven, the speech he has made will determine one family's coming fortune, weal and woe.

New Years Eve is on 30th of the last lunar month, people started get busy once they got up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging new year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.
Good. Now I have underlined most of the problem areas. See if you can fix these:

Most of Chinese folk festivals are basis of four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. In order to meet this vigour and vitality season, "Spring Festival" had came into being. The Spring Festival of Han nationailty is the lunar Chinese New Year, which has 3000 years history.

Spring Festival is the holiday, which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festivals.

For thousands of years, as the lunar years ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year's harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.

When the twelfth month of the lunar year come, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.

The 23rd day of the last lunar month is an annual worshipping Kitchen Day, this is the major festival in the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every family's
houseworks, and it is said that, when he returns to heaven, the speech he has made will determine one family's coming fortune, weal and woe.

New Years Eve is on 30th of the last lunar month, people started get busy once they got up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging new year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.
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Most China's folk festivals are based on four seasons-spring, summer, autumn, winter. To celebrate the season of vitality and rebirth, Spring Festival came into being. the lunar Chinese New Year is Han's Spring Festival which has 3000 year history.

Spring Festival is the holiday which has the largest scale and it lasts the longest time of China's folks festivals.

For thousands of years, as the lunar year ended and a new year began, people who worked hard all year worshipped their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year's harvest and praying for good weather for the ensuing year, bring prosperity to both man and animals.

When the twelfth month of the lunar year came, the family started to get busy for preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.

The 23rd day of the last lunar month is a worshipping Kitchen Day for every year, this is the major festival among the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every household chores, and it is said that when he returns to heaven, the speech he made will determine a family's coming fortune, weal and woe.

New Year's Eve is on 30th of the last lunar month. People started to get busy since they woken up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging New Year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.

i did not fix the red colour words that because i dont know how Emotion: smile hope i didnt make it worse Emotion: smile

You did well. OK, my turn:

Most of China's folk festivals are based on the four seasons. To celebrate the season of vitality and rebirth, the Spring Festival came into being. The Chinese lunar New Year is the occasion of the Han Spring Festival, which has a 3000-year history. The Spring Festival is China's longest and largest-scale folk festival.

For thousands of years, as the lunar year ended and a new year began, people who have worked hard all year worship their gods and ancestors, celebrating the year's harvest and praying for good weather to bring prosperity to both man and animals for the ensuing year. When the twelfth month of the lunar year comes, the family gets busy preparing the upcoming celebrations around the Spring Festival.

The 23rd day of the last lunar month is worshipped as Kitchen Day every year. This is the major of the five ancient festivals. The kitchen god has great authority to control every household's chores, and it is said that when he returns to heaven, the speech he gives there will determine a family's coming fortune, weal and woe.

New Year's Eve is the 30th of the last lunar month. People busy themselves as soon as they wake up, displaying spring couplets, changing door gods, hanging New Year pictures, and pasting paper cut arts.

Does 'couplets' mean 'poems'? If so, use 'poetry'.

OK-- I give up! I can't fix the strange formatting mistake in the middle, livvil, sorry. I hope you can understand my meaning! If not, please ask me.
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