With the busy life, it is hard for people to take part in volunteer activities. However, the benefits of volunteering to ourselves, our family and even the community can not be denied. Thus, for success in finding a suitable volunteer work, you should follow these fundamental instructions.

To begin with, you should identify the type of volunteer work that you are really passionate about. In deed, choosing the suitable job generates the motivation for you to work more creatively and optimize productivity. In addition, it also helps you cope with the high pressure in work environment. After that, determine what skills that you would like to gain and develop. For instance, if you volunteer to teach children or adults how to read and write, this experience will help you prepare for your job in education. An another example is that if you serve as a treasurer of an organization, you will acquire the knowledge more about banking, which is helpful for you career path in the future.

Next, effective time management skills is necessary for you so that the volunteer job would not influence on your own life. Ensure you are able to balance your volunteer work with your study. For example, if you have a heavy schedule at school, you should refuse to join the social activities at the same time, or you can find the other ones which do not take much time to do because your study is the most important. Simultaneously, take the place you want to work as a volunteer into consideration, make sure your work place does not take you a lot of time to commute.

Finally, you should search for your volunteer work through organizations. If you are a student, your own school is the ideal place for you to start a volunteer work. Ask your teacher or visit counselor about any opportunities, they might be able to direct you towards. Meanwhile, there are a lot of local service organizations that give you opportunities to find a better job. Through these websites, you can send the message directly to the hirer. After that, they will arrange an interview about your personality and your strength that are qualified for the job.

On the whole, if you follow these steps, you will have an ideal volunteer work. It takes only some minutes to identifying the volunteer work, make a plan and searching an organization, you will have opportunities to experience and improve yourself through the volunteering benefits. Ensure that you will persist with the job, put your enthusiasm in it and try to learn new things. One day, you will receive the great result.

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I ran it through Grammarly.com and there are 16 things and explanations. I hope you can see them. I used Grammarly's free version. I didn't look further, but this is a really well-structured essay at first glace!!!


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With the busy life, it is hard for people to take part in volunteer activities. However, the benefits of volunteering to ourselves, our family and even the community can not be denied. Thus, for success in finding a suitable volunteer work, you should follow these fundamental instructions.

To begin with, you should identify the type of volunteer work that you are really passionate about. In deed, choosing the suitable job generates the motivation for you to work more creatively and optimize productivity. In addition, it also helps you cope with the high pressure in work environment. After that, determine what skills that you would like to gain and develop. For instance, if you volunteer to teach children or adults how to read and write, this experience will help you prepare for your job in education. An another example is that if you serve as a treasurer of an organization, you will acquire the knowledge more about banking, which is helpful for you career path in the future.

Next, effective time management skills is necessary for you so that the volunteer job would not influence on your own life. Ensure you are able to balance your volunteer work with your study. For example, if you have a heavy schedule at school, you should refuse to join the social activities at the same time, or you can find the other ones which do not take much time to do because your study is the most important. Simultaneously, take the place you want to work as a volunteer into consideration, make sure your work place does not take you a lot of time to commute.

Finally, you should search for your volunteer work through organizations. If you are a student, your own school is the ideal place for you to start a volunteer work. Ask your teacher or visit counselor about any opportunities, they might be able to direct you towards. Meanwhile, there are a lot of local service organizations that give you opportunities to find a better job. Through these websites, you can send the message directly to the hirer. After that, they will arrange an interview about your personality and your strength that are qualified for the job.

On the whole, if you follow these steps, you will have an ideal volunteer work. It takes only some minutes to identifying the volunteer work, make a plan and searching an organization, you will have opportunities to experience and improve yourself through the volunteering benefits. Ensure that you will persist with the job, put your enthusiasm in it and try to learn new things. One day, you will receive the great result.

First, "a volunteer work" is not correct. "Work" is not countable. However, you can say "a volunteer job." "Job" is countable.



With the busy life, (unnatural. "Because of our busy lives, " / "Since people are very busy today," ) it is hard for people to take part in volunteer activities. However, the benefits of volunteering to for you, ourselves, your family and even the community can not be denied. Thus, for success in finding a suitable volunteer work, you should follow these fundamental basic / simple instructions. (Don't switch from "we" to "you". Keep one consistent person (pronoun) throughout an essay.)

To begin with, you should identify the type of volunteer work that you are really passionate about. In deed, choosing the suitable job generates the motivation for you to work more creatively and optimize productivity. In addition, it also helps you cope with the high pressure in work environment. (If a volunteer job has high pressure, and makes you stressed, nervous and upset, you should not do that, but change jobs!) After that, determine what skills that you would like to gain and develop. For instance, if you volunteer to teach children or adults how to read and write, this experience will help you prepare for your job in education. An another example is that if you serve as a treasurer of an organization, you will acquire the knowledge more about banking (accounting), which is helpful for you career path in the future.

Next, effective time management skills is necessary for you so that the volunteer job would not influence on your own life. (?? I think you mean "adversely impact your life" or "interfere with schoolwork or your paid job.)" Ensure you are able to balance your volunteer work with your study. For example, if you have a heavy schedule at school, you should refuse to join the participate in social activities at the same time, or you can find the other ones which do not take much time to do because your study is the most important. Simultaneously, take the place you want to work as a volunteer into consideration, (comma splice error) make sure your work place it does not take you a lot of time to commute there.

Finally, you should search for your volunteer work through organizations. If you are a student, your own school is the ideal place for you to start a volunteer work. Ask your teacher or visit counselor about any opportunities, (comma splice error) they might be able to direct you towards (missing word). Meanwhile, there are a lot of local service organizations that give you opportunities to find a better job. Through these websites, you can send the a message directly to the hirer. (wrong word) After that, they will arrange an interview with you. about your personality and your strength that are qualified for the job.

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On the whole, if you follow these steps, you will have an ideal volunteer job work. It takes only some minutes to identifying (wrong form) the volunteer work, make a plan and searching for an organization, (comma splice error) you will have opportunities to experience and improve yourself through the volunteering benefits. Ensure that you will persist with the job, put your enthusiasm in it and try to learn new things. One day, you will receive the great result.

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Sorry that the Grammarly marks didn't remain on the page after I saved.

I did my own edit and I estimated that Grammarly was only accurate 12/16 cases (75%), so be cautious. It also missed 9! and missed opportunities to improve the writing as well.

Computer programs like Word and Google docs make both false positive and false negative errors when analyzing text.

Spelling mistakes are probably the most reliable errors that are caught.
Trivial grammatical errors (singular/plural) and common word confusions (there / their / they're) would be next. After that, they are quite spotty.

I have never used the software that you mention. It might be beneficial for English learners in the band 4-6 range in the IELTS writing tasks.

At 4 and below, the writing is too rife with mistakes for the program to decipher.
Above 6, the program will start to give misleading or poor results, especially when compared to a native speaker with good writing skills.

Yes, thanks. I am doing some investigation for an article and am comparing some of the AI programs. Companies are using them for employees! Which means they SHOULD theoretically have been optimised before they went to market.

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Everything with a number came from a grammar checker. Everything else in blue is what I added. It's suggestions anyway..

As a process essay, this is overall VERY well organized, coherent and cohesive, in my opinion. It takes a lot of thought to string together something like this.

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With 1 a the busy life, it is hard for people to take part in volunteer activities. However, the benefits of volunteering to ourselves, our family and even the community can not be denied. Thus, for success in finding 2 a suitable volunteer work, you should follow these some fundamental instructions steps.

To begin with, you should identify the type of volunteer work that you are really passionate about. 3 Indeed, choosing 4 a the suitable job generates the motivation for you to work more creatively and optimize productivity. In addition, it also helps you learn to cope with the high pressure in 5 the work environment. After that, determine what skills 6 that you would like to gain and develop. For instance, if you volunteer to teach children or adults how to read and write, this experience will help you prepare for your job in education. 7 An another example is that if you serve as a treasurer of an organization, you will be able to/ will have the chance to acquire (more?) the knowledge more about banking, which is could be helpful for 8 you your career path in the future.

Next, effective time management skills 9 is are necessary for you so that the volunteer job would not influence on your own life. Ensure you are able to balance your volunteer work with your study. For example, if you have a heavy schedule at school, you should refuse to join the social activities at the same time, or you can find the other ones which do not take much time to do because your study is the most important. Simultaneously, take the place you want to work as a volunteer into consideration, and make sure your 10 work place workplace does not take you a lot of time to commute.

Finally, you should search for your volunteer work through organizations. If you are a student, your own school is the ideal place for you to start 11 a volunteer work. Ask your teacher or visit see a counselor about any opportunities they might be able to direct you towards. Meanwhile, there are a lot of local service organizations that give you opportunities to find a better job. Through these websites, you can send the a / your message directly to the hirer. After that, they will arrange an interview to talk with you about your personality and your strengths, that and how you are qualified for the job.

On the whole, if you follow these steps, you will have an find ideal volunteer work. It takes only some a few minutes to 12 identifying the volunteer work, make a plan and searching for an organization. [-->i am putting this at the end , you will have opportunities to experience and improve yourself through the volunteering benefits]. Ensure that you will persist with the job. , put Put your enthusiasm into it and try to learn new things. One day, you will receive the great results. Yyou will have opportunities to gain experience and improve yourself, and you everyone will benefit from through the volunteering. benefits.

what about the idea of being "rewarding" "valuable experience"

nel0506Companies are using them for employees! Which means they SHOULD theoretically have been optimised before they went to market.

Which means they (the employees) SHOULD theoretically have been optimised before they (the companies) went to market.

Yes, the companies should have optimized their staff (on the dimension of communications skills) before they get into the competitive marketplace.

No kidding. You can see by this little example how tricky language is!

The only truly successful computer demonstration of deep human language understanding is IBM's Watson, which won the game of Jeopardy against the most skilled human contestants.

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