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Can I adhere to these sentences?

Could you please offer your feedback on this phase of work?

I offered my positive feedback to this phase of work. Please make the progress at this pace of work.

I offered my feedback to this product.

I offered my feedback to this film.

I offered my feedback to his performance.

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Can I adhere to these sentences? Say eg Do i need to change any of these sentence?

Could you please offer your feedback on this phase of the project / of the work?

I offered my positive feedback on this phase of the work. Please continue to work at this pace.

I offered my feedback on this product.

I offered my feedback about this film.

I offered my feedback on his performance.

New learner of English seem to love the word 'feedback'. Try to vary your vocabulary a bit. You could ask for eg comments / suggestions / changes / additions / approval.

Clive

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Clive

I offered my feedback on this product.

I offered my feedback about this film.

Could you please explain that Why should we use "about" instead of "on"?

I offered my feedback on his performance.


Thanks

There is usually no big difference. On seems a little more precise to me.

Clive