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hello,


Can you help with correction of the little paragraph?



Here are my questions?


Is it possible to use dwindle like this?

Is it correct to say : leave on bad terms?

Is it correct to start a sentence like : its not to say that...?

Finally is it correct to say : Its not my temperament to...?


Our love for each other had dwindled before we finally left each other on bad terms. It’s not to say I didn’t try to make things work. I don’t give up easily. That’s just not my temperament to give up without trying.


thank you for the help

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This sounds familiar.

anonymousIs it possible to use dwindle like this?

I don't like it. Dwindling is a process, so you would need to say something like "dwindled away to nothing".

anonymousIs it correct to say : leave on bad terms?

Yes.

anonymousIs it correct to start a sentence like : its not to say that...?

Not this one. It's "That's not to say …."

anonymousFinally is it correct to say : Its not my temperament to...?

I would put "not in my temperament". You wrote "That's not my temperament …", by the way.