Some people think that the educational system should put financial lecture on the semester of students as a required subject. This essay will explain some reasons why I agree with a portion of this statement.
On the one hand, there are some reasons for why financial lesson should be taught in the school. First of all, finance is obviously an indispensable aspect in every portion of our lives, but this aspect is not been straightforward by students. In other words, financial knowledge should be considered as one of the most crucial subjects, because it plays a vital role in today’s modern society. As a result, by learning it, the students are able to gain the knowledge and understand the function and the importance of that aspect in daily life. Second of all, teaching finance at school, it may be a positive way for students in order to contact or cope with the issues, investments or making decisions related to sum in the future. This way lead them to lay the foundation for addressing problems, financial decisions or earning extra money and it is not only having that function, student, who want to open an enterprise in the future, can make their business have good investments and make financial decisions wisely.
On the other hand, beside these advantages, putting finance into the school program also has some drawbacks. Firstly, most of the students are not able to understand this element of life comprehensively at their age. The reason for that they are still very young and they do not have any experiences about using and understanding money properly, therefore they may think that they do not need to worry about the finance, while their parents can think without the help from them. Secondly, in school program, the pupils have to learn a lot of subject, particularly maths, literature, science, geography or history, the burden on their shoulders would be added if the financial subject was taught. This burden is able to lead the students to create negative attitudes like having more stressful when going to school.
In conclusion, teaching finance at school may be good or may have problems as well. I recommend that, we should teach that aspect of daily life for students after they finish three basic level of study – primary school, secondary school and high school.
[ 1] Money is an important part of life, and everyone needs to learn how to manage their finances well. Otherwise, they will face all kinds of difficulties. Therefore, some people think that the educational system should put include a financial lecture on subject in the school curriculum. semester of students as a required subject. This essay will explain some reasons why I partially agree with a [ 2] portion of this statement.
On the one hand, there are some reasons for why including financial lessons should be taught in the school curriculum. First of all, finance is obviously an indispensable aspect in every portion of our lives, [ 3] but this aspect is not been straightforward by students. In other words, financial knowledge should be considered as one of the most crucial subjects, because it plays a vital role in today’s modern society. As a result, and by learning about it, the students can manage their money matters well. are able to gain the knowledge and understand the function and the importance of that aspect in daily life. [ 4] Second of all, Furthermore, teaching a finance class at school [ 5] , it may be a positive way for students in order to contact or teach students to cope with various money-related challenges and other the issues. For instance, it would help them understand the concept of debt, investments or as well as how to make ing smart investment decisions, related to sum in or how to save money for the future. This way lead them to lay the foundation for addressing problems, financial decisions or earning extra money and it is not only having that function, student, who want to open an enterprise in the future, In fact, it can make their teach them useful business skills as well as the basics of accounting. have good investments and make financial decisions wisely.
On the other hand, beside these advantages, putting finance into the school program also has some drawbacks. Firstly, most of the many students are not able too young to understand or appreciate finance. this element of life comprehensively at their age. The reason for that they are still very young and they do not have any experiences about using and understanding money properly, therefore they may think that they Being young, they do not need to worry about money, since the finance, while their parents can think without the help from usually take care of that. Secondly, in school program, the [ 6] pupils students already have to learn a lot of subjects, particularly maths, literature, science, geography or history, so including another difficult subject would add to the burden. on their shoulders would be added if the financial subject was taught. This burden is able to lead the students to would make them dislike finance because of the extra stress. create negative attitudes like having more stressful when going to school.
In conclusion, teaching finance at school helps young students learn how to manage their money affairs and plan for the future, but it can also be stressful and add to their study load. may be good or may have problems as well. [ 7] I recommend that, we should teach that aspect of daily life for students after they finish three basic level of study – primary school, secondary school and high school.
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[ 1]: Start with a general sentence just to introduce the main topic to the reader. Then give some background.
[ 2]: There are no “portions” here. It is a simple one-part question!
[ 3]: AVOID repetition. It frustrates the examiner and lowers your score.
[ 4]: Do not use “second of all”.
[ 5]: You have two subjects in that sentence (teaching finances, and it).
[ 6]: “Pupils” is for primary school kids only.
[ 7]: Do not introduce new concepts in the conclusion. All you need is a sentence or two that summarize the main points/findings from the body paragraphs.
Finally, you wrote 388 words, which is too many! In the real exam, you do not have time for that. Aim for a maximum of around 280.
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