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1 . Subject of cecilia Beux's painting included prominent figures in Goverment, the arts, and
financial, but her strongest works are portraits of family members and friends
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Subjects of Cecilia Beaux's paintings include prominent figures in government, the arts, and finance but her strongest works are portraits of family members and friends.