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Hi

There are few given sentences. Each sentence contains some faults and has some mistakes may be wrong sentence constructions. Please help me to find out the mistakes:

1. Success or failure do not affect one who is bound to one's duty.

2. of the three Limca, Sprite and Pepsi the letter is his favourite.

3. Sonu is junior than Sapna by two years.

4. In a group you may found one or two people who tend to be extermely vocal.

5. Netaji was born in Cuttack but Calcutta was his home in letter years.

6. Dr. Ghosh was not only courteous to rich patients but also to poor ones.

7. He felt delighted to act as an emissary even though he known that he may not succeeded.

8. He could not explain what actually constitutes an alive and working democracy.

9. My brother has not much books.

Thanking you

Yours truly, Himadri Roy
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Hi,

Can you give us your thoughts first?

Best wishes, Clive
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1. Success or failure do not affect one who is bound to one's duty.
Not a bad sentence. You could put the verb in the singular: does not affect...

2. of the three Limca, Sprite and Pepsi the letter is his favourite.

Of the three - Limca, Sprite and Pepsi - the last is his favourite (latter refers to only two).
3. Sonu is junior than Sapna by two years.
junior to or two years younger than

4. In a group you may found one or two people who tend to be extermely vocal.
you may find

5. Netaji was born in Cuttack but Calcutta was his home in letter years.
in later years

6. Dr. Ghosh was not only courteous to rich patients but also to poor ones.
A farily normal sentence, but better to say courteous not only to...

7. He felt delighted to act as an emissary even though he known that he may not succeeded.
even though he knew that he might not succeed

8. He could not explain what actually constitutes an alive and working democracy.
a living, working democracy

9. My brother has not much books.
not many books
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Sir,

Acctually Sir, I found this in a newpaper article where its given to find out the errors in the given sentences. I found few of them but few of them I can not. Those which I can not find place of the mistakes are I post it to english forms to you. So please Sir, I would be very greatful to you if you do this for me.

Thanking you

Yours truly, Himadri Roy
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