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Hi  i have deadline tomorrow.The task is to present my product here is what i have written. Every time i do a writing task, I dont do it well my teacher said. Well i hope people here can help me a lot

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“Easy to hold , Easy to eat”

We know what our customer need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way to wrapping your French fries. Most of our customer hate that their French fries fall out of the containers. Hating French fries is something that we have to end. The way to end the French fries problem, we have made a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries to fall out.

We give you people a new delouse way to eat your French fries, from Hungry Jacks.

The French fries containers make McDonald’s matchless against Hungry Jacks. Our containers would be the most sellable product to the customers.

The containers are made of plastic and it carries French fries inside. We take care of the environment, that’s why we made containers of recycle plastic. We know those French fries are hot when they are inside. We have made a solution for that problem; we have made many holes on the top of the containers, to let the steam out.

We want every customer of our to bring their food easily home. Our customer must enjoy their meal from Hungry Jacks. That’s why we say “Easy to hold, easy to eat”.
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I don't understand why you did not take the excellent advice you were given.

And for God's sake, I don't know what you mean by "delouse" but a louse is a disgusting bug that lives in your hair, so figure out what word you mean instead of that. Maybe delux?
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“Easy to hold , Easy to eat”

We know what our customers need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way of wrapping your French fries. Most of our customers hate it when their French fries fall out of their containers. This is a problem we want to end, so we designed a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries from falling out.

Our containers is a new way to eat your French fries. MacDonald's containers cannot be matched against ours.

Our containers, though made of plastic, are environmentally-friendly because they are made from recyclable plastic. We know those French fries are hot, so we have made many holes on the top of the containers to let out the steam.

We want our customers to bring home their food easily. Our customers will enjoy their meals from Hungry Jacks. That’s why we say “Easy to hold, easy to eat”.

Chris
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Easy to hold , Easy to eat”



We know what our customer need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way of wrapping your French fries. Most of our customer hate when their French fries fall out of their containers. . This is a problem we want to end, so we designed a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries from falling out.



We give you people a new delouse way to eat your French fries, from Hungry Jacks. Our French fries containers make McDonald’s matchless against Hungry Jacks. Our containers would be the most sellable product to the customers.

Our containers are made of plastic and it carries French fries inside. We take care of the environment, and that’s the reason behind why we made containers of recycle plastic. We know those French fries are hot when they are inside, and therefore we thought to make a solution for this problem; we made many holes on the top of the containers, to let the steam out.



We want every customer of our to bring their food home, easily. Our customers will enjoy their meals from Hungry Jacks. That’s why we say “Easy to hold, easy to eat”.

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i meant something good u know if something taste good it is ""

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