+0
Thanks for the great forum and its members, helping others!
I really appreciate your work!

Could you please tell me, if this version of my translation is 100% native English?

Amputation
Amputated body part can be reattached again. Goal: Keep amputated part cool until you arrive at hospital.

1. Calm the person, lay him/her down, and cover with blanket.
2. Stop the bleeding, see 'Bleeding (severe)' and 'Shock'.
3. Wrap amputated part in a clean and dry cloth, then put it into a waterproof plastic bag.
4. Close this bag and put it into another plastic bag, that contains cool water/ice.
5. Do not give alcohol, cigarettes or food to casualty (in case of a surgery in hospital).
6. Do not freeze the ampurtated part (just keep it cool).
7. Call emergency or drive casualty to hospital yourself.

I need to add this text to my first aid project. If you are interested in the project see http://www.firstai.de/wiki /

Thank you so much!
+0
Amputation
Amputated body part can be reattached again: Goal: Keep amputated part cool until you arrive at hospital.

1. Calm the person, lay him/her down, and cover with blanket.
2. Stop the bleeding: see 'Bleeding (severe)' and 'Shock'.
3. Wrap amputated part in a clean and dry cloth, then put it into a waterproof plastic bag.
4. Close this bag and put it into another plastic bag that contains cool water/ice.
5. Do not give alcohol, cigarettes or food to casualty (in case surgery is carried out in hospital).
6. Do not freeze the amputated part (just keep it cool).
7. Call emergency or drive casualty to hospital yourself.
Comments  
Thanks a lot for your help, Feebs!