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- How do you think she feels when you come home in the middle of the night stinking of booze almost every day at the moment.

- She's fine.

- You sure about that? Besides, she's also been sad about what happened to Dylan. She knew him too. So don't think you're the only one this has been difficult for.


Is this flawless conversational English or should I change anything?

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anonymous

- How do you think she feels when you come home in the middle of the night stinking of booze [almost every day at the moment].

- She's fine.

- You sure about that? Besides, she's also been sad about what happened to Dylan. She knew him too. So don't think you're the only one this has been difficult for.


Is this flawless conversational English or should I change anything?

I'd change the bracketed phrase or omit it. Otherwise, it seems OK to me.

CJ