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Large investment in transportation service projects by FLYCAM is being actively taking place in the market in many fields. The use of remote control drones in transportation is not an old idea. Which has been and is growing continuously through large and small businesses all over the world. And with the current complicated epidemic situation, transportation projects in general and drone projects transporting essential items in particular are being researched, perfected and can be widely developed in the future. future. Grasping that advantage, our team has embarked on a research project on a drone project to transport essential supplies. The drone is responsible for receiving GPS signals and automatically drawing the flight path. The technologies programmed are INAV technology to fly according to GPS positioning with high accuracy and error of less than 1m. This is the first technology brought to Can Tho. In addition, the aircraft can carry loads up to 2kg and automatically avoid administrative and military areas. In addition to delivery purposes, these unmanned aerial vehicles are also used to deliver supplies to quarantine areas. The entire route is controlled via GPS, although there is still a technical staff on duty to prevent bad situations that may occur. The movement of the drone is observed on the screen. After reaching the destination, the drone will gradually descend and deliver the goods and then return to the starting point. We tested the flights in the countryside. The latest test in a crowded urban area is an important step towards safer drone deployment in an area filled with buildings, power lines and lights. Thereby, our team has learned the operation method as well as developed the advantages and overcome the disadvantages to gradually perfect the product. With the motto of always providing customers with a quality delivery service, expressed through speed and safety on each order, during the past time, our team has been and will not stop researching. , improve and improve quality.

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Large investment (Wrong form.) in in transportation service projects by FLYCAM is being actively taking place (take place is not a good verb for "investments") in the market in many fields. (That does not make sense.) The use of remote control drones in transportation is not an old idea. (It is a novel idea?) Which has been and is growing continuously through large and small businesses all over the world. (Fragment, not a sentence) And with the current pandemic complicated epidemic situation, transportation projects in general and drone projects transporting essential items in particular are being researched, perfected and can be widely developed in the future. future. Grasping that advantage, (unnatural Do you mean "taking advantage of this situation?) our team has embarked on a research project on a drone project to transport essential supplies. The drone is responsible for uses the receiving GPS satellite network signals and automatically determines / calculates drawing the flight path to the destination. The technologies programmed are Inertial Navigation ( INAV ) programming enables the craft technology to fly according to GPS positioning with less than 1 meter high accuracy and error of less than 1m. This is the first technology brought to Can Tho. (That does not logically belong here.) In addition, the aircraft can carry loads up to 2kg and automatically avoids restricted or controlled airspace. administrative and military areas. In addition to delivery purposes, these unmanned aerial vehicles are also used to deliver supplies (That is redundant and makes no sense. - In addition to delivery, it delivers???to quarantine areas. The entire route is controlled via GPS, although there is still a technical staff on duty to prevent bad situations that may occur. The movement of the drone is observed on the screen. (That belongs earlier in the text when you describe the flight control systems.) After reaching the destination, the drone will gradually descend and deliver the payload goods and then return to the starting point. (You need to start a new paragraph. The topic has changed. The paragraphing of your text is not logical. You need to restructure the entire text so it flows in a sensible manner. ) We tested the flights in the countryside. The latest test in a crowded urban area is an important step towards safer drone deployment in an area filled with buildings, power lines and lights. Thereby, our team has learned the operation method as well as developed the advantages and overcome the disadvantages to gradually perfect the product. (awkward) With the motto of always providing customers with a quality delivery service, expressed through speed and safety on each order, during the past time, our team has been and will not stop researching. , improve and improve (redundant, wrong verb form) quality.