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We are occupied in official activities now. so the promotional activity may be focused after 3 months.

They are occupied in official activities now. so the promotional activity may be focused after 3 months.


Are these sentence correct?

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Here is more natural English.

They are busy right now, so the promotion will have to wait for three months.

Clive

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Tank you for your comment.

I did try to take into account the information that was provided.

If a sentence is correct grammar but would not be said by a native speaker, are you suggesting that I say it is correct?

Most people on the Forum seem happy to be told how a native speaker would say something. It's hard to satisfy everyone.

Clive

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Hello, dear author! To be honest, these your variants are completely fine, but also I think that it would be better for you to take into account the information which is mentioned by the author above. So please just try to do it and share the result with us here!

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