Good morning ma'am,

Apologies for the late response. I was waiting for a feedback on our discussion on an increase in the salary to (****). In the mail I received, you stated that you would discuss the development with Mrs xxxx to consider the offer. It was the feedback from your discussion with her that I have been waiting for when I received your mail yesterday.
I really would love to work with the team but I would appreciate if the payment is looked into.


Yours sincerely,

*****


Please is this letter official enough?

Emerald 108Please is this letter official enough?

It may be your "official" response - that is the one you will defend as your own.

But the English is faulty and it has a distinctly informal or casual tone.