Hello,
I need to write an email as I would like to apply for a job in England. Could you correct it, please?
I would be grateful for your help.

Dear Ms ……………………….,
I am highly interested in the post of a music teacher in your school.
I would appreciate if I could receive your application form.
Would it be possible to send it to my email address?
Were it not possible, I would appreciate if you could send the application form to my home address:
0 Saint-Martin Street
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I would like know if all the applicants are invited/can feel invited/ can expect to be invited to the interview that will be held in your school on the 30 July?
I would be grateful for your help.
Yours sincerely,
xyz

Thank you for your help,
Kind regards.
Dear Ms ……………………….,

I am very interested in the post of a music teacher in your school. I have attached my resume for your consideration.

Would it be possible to send the application form to my email address? If not, please send it to my home address:

0 Saint-Martin Street
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Is every applicant expected to attend the interview at your school on July 30th, or will you be notifying only those whom you wish to interview?

Yours sincerely,

Xyz
Thank you very much.
That's very helpful Emotion: smile
Kind regards.