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Hi guys

Could you check My essay About "Formal Email" of grammar and spelling

I receive your email last week telling us you could attend the meeting.
I am writing to inform you that your visit to Dammam city Has been organizd.
I have great pleasure in welcoming you to visit our company. Please find attached a detailed programme of your activities and details of your accommodation. But, if you have problem with open the attachment or doesn't work please tell us to act quickly .
You will staying for six days and you will staying at Rehab Hotel, as you see.
We have included a visit to national museum, zoological park , mount Gara and Aramco exhibit.
there will be also many opportunities to experience other attraction of our town.
Please feel free to suggest change if you want to do so.
I very much look forward to meeting you , and welcoming you to our town . I hope you will enjoy your visit.

Yours truly.

Mr. AlSaleh Yassen
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Hello, AlSelah - and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised email here for us to check.

I receive your email last week telling us you could attend the meeting. I am writing to inform you that your visit to Dammam city Has been organizd. I have great pleasure in welcoming you to visit our company. Please find attached a detailed programme of your activities and details of your accommodation. But, if you have problem with open the attachment or doesn't work please tell us to act quickly . You will staying for six days and you will staying at Rehab Hotel, as you see. We have included a visit to national museum, zoological park , mount Gara and Aramco exhibit. there will be also many opportunities to experience other attraction of our town. Please feel free to suggest change if you want to do so. I very much look forward to meeting you , and welcoming you to our town . I hope you will enjoy your visit.

Yours truly.

Mr. AlSaleh Yassen
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I received your email last week telling us you could attend the meeting. I am writing to inform you that your visit to Dammam city has been organized. I have great pleasure in welcoming you to visit our company. Please find attached a detailed programme of your activities and details of your accommodation. But, if you have problemed with opened the attachment or didn't work please tell us to act quickly( I don't know what's problem here) . You will staying for six days and you will staying at Rehab Hotel, as you see. We have included a visit to the National museum, zoological park , Mount Gara and Aramco Exhibit. There will be ( I don't know what's problem here)also many opportunities to experience other attraction( I don't know what's problem here) of our town. Please feel free to suggest changed if you want to do so. I very much look forward to meeting you , and welcoming you to our town . I hope you will enjoy your visit.

Yours truly.

Mr. AlSaleh Yassen
I received your email last week telling us you could attend the meeting. I am writing to inform you that your visit to Dammam City has been organized, and I take great pleasure in welcoming you to visit our company.

Please find attached a detailed programme of your activities and details of your accommodation. If you have any difficulty opening the attachment, please let us know as soon as possible. You will staying for six days at the Rehab Hotel, as you see. We have included a visit to the National Museum, our zoological park, Mount Gara and the Aramco Exhibit. There will also be many opportunities to experience other attractions of our town. Please feel free to suggest any changes you wish.

I very much look forward to meeting you and welcoming you to our town. I hope you will enjoy your visit.

Yours truly,

AlSaleh Yassen
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