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can someone could help me with these paragraphs? I don´t know if they are correct, it sounds a bit strange to me.. I am confident, that with personal assets such as very good writing skills, gained through essay writing at university, I could contribute to the work of (xxxx). Regarding expectations, I would hope to gain an insight into the internal working process of (xxxx) towards a more coherent EU policy in the area of territorial development and planning.
 
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dear sir I request you to grant me leave from 20-8-2016 to 22-8-2016 as i ll be going to attend my convocation ceremony. Yours faithfully name
 
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Dear all. Suppose I am writing to my supervisor, who offers me several alternatives about a subject. Is it proper for me to say "I would be pleased if..."?
 
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Dear all, Please help to give me an advice and correction. Thank you. Regards, Vincent ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- My address Date Mr. Wong (The Headmaster) School name and school address Dear Mr. Wong: We would like to apply for admission for my daughter to your school in 2005. My daughter’s name is Ching Ching and she is studying in level 3 at *** kindergarten. We have great respect for the school's reputation, and we think highly of the school's facilities. We trust your school can provide good environment for her study here to equip herself for her future challenges. Ching Ching is an adorable girl. Honestly speaking, she is not very smart but she is very active and she enjoy almost all activities inside and outside kindergarten such as common academic lessons, ballet dancing, violin lesson, school panic, building visiting and other activities. She can do within our expectation if we give her an enough encourage and guiding. For example, she almost gets 100% marks on school’s memorable test. With respect to music, her violin teacher told us that she play it well. With respect to ballet, her ballet teacher satisfies her performance too and informs us we can let her to take the exam of ballet. With regard to common academic lessons, she already like picking her school book up and read loudly if she has a space time and she love writing and drawing although the output is not good. We would give all our effects to support her and to improve our knowledge about how to guide her in the best way. We try to join related forum and discussion as much as we can. Moreover, in violin aspect, to make sure we can guide her better, I took a full adult violin course separately. Actually, we don’t expect her to be a famous violin player, but we hope she can enjoy it. Thank you for your attention to this matter, and we look forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Mr. Vincent Yim
 
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Hi, As a Dutch national in an international working environment I regularly need to write business e-mails in English. I am doubting whether 'with kind regards' or 'kind regards' is the proper closing for an e-mail. My Dutch collegues tend to say 'with kind regards' but I am not sure if that is not too 'Dutch-English'. I know that it is too informal usually for formal letters, in that case I use 'yours sincerely'. I appreciate any help from you! Thanks! Silvie.
 
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She will be arriving to the hotel via Disney's Magical Express around 9:30 PM
 
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I have noticed that the phrase "please to send me" or "to please refrain" is regularly used in emails. Have the rules changed over the years or is this just bad vocabulary?
 
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I have written an e-mail to my employer declining the offer for a task due to low salary. Could anyone please proof-read it? Thank you for extending me the offer of drafting the P2 work. I appreciate  your offering me this opportunity and would like to extend my gratitude for the same. After careful consideration Regretfully, I must decline your offer. While not wanting to sound impudent, I wish to place on record the reason(s), I feel so. And this stems from my concern regarding the compensation package offered to me. While I understand that this is the going rate for job such a this from the vantage point of Ims, I also believe that this is a bit too low for a job such as this from the perspective of the compiler. I was hoping that the hard work that goes in, in terms of the research, as it were, in terms of the time spent, the enormous amount of powers of concentration this commands and the level of dedication it demands would be taken into account while devising the compensation package, which I think is woefully short of my expectations in as much as it is not commensurate with the efforts in many respects put in. In these circumstances I feel I wouldn't be able to do justice to this task, responsibly. But I feel I require a salary that is in harmony with my credentials and sufficient to meet desire for self-satisfaction. I only wish that circumstances allowed me to accept your offer. Best wishes for your continued success. I hope that we can discuss this matter further. If you feel that these are reasonable concerns. I am sure that we can come to a mutually satisfactory arrangement. I will be more than happy to discuss this issue further. Best regards, Honey Singh
 
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Hello everyone, I've just come across an odd salutation at the beginning of a formal business letter: Dear business friends, Apparently, a company is inviting their ' business friends ' to attend the opening of a new retail shop. Can ' business friends ' be different from ' business partners ' ? Is the former ever used? I actually think the author may have meant the latter. Google search results suggest that this phrase is almost exclusively used by non-native speakers of English, so it might turn out be some sort of foreignism. What do you think? Many thanks for your opinions! P....
 
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Hi, We have a function out here in our localatiy. For this purpose every year we first take permission from the police regarding this function. I was thinking if I would be asked to write a letter to the police for permission, what should I have wrote. I wrote a letter in this connection. Please Check this letter and also suggest me some good vocabularies which I can replace with my given vocabularies. I will be very greatful to you if you please let me know your valuable suggestions. " To The Inspector In Charge, Matigara Block Sub: PERMISSION FOR KALI PUJA Respected Sir With due respect, I would like to inform you on behalf of NABIN SANGHA - Shivmandir that on 21st of this month we are going to organise Kali Puja at our place. For this purpose we need your permission to organise this event and also support of yours to organise this event in a hassel free mannar without having any social trouble. Thanking You Yours faithfully, Club Secretary, XYZ "
 
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Sir Im sahana roy.I did my graduation from calcutta univeraity with physics honours.after my graduation i have realized that could not do good with this subject and mba is better option for excel in this corporate world.I and harkworking and sincere in my work.I can communicate well with my friends.reading story books and singing are my hobbies.I know fortran which is a programming language. Is this a good letter about myself.if any change is requied pls tell me
 
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Ok, thank u . only this mistake ? I am Seetha from Kerala(Indai)
 
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thank u... Is it correct?
 
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The Hard copy will be sent today .... is correct or not
 
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Here there is my cover letter for a trainee placement in a museum. Please let me know about mistakes and the overall form. Thank you for your patience To whom it may concerns, I am writing You in order to apply for the Erasmus Plus traineeship program, an EU's flagship initiative for a minimum of 2 months to a Maxime of 12 months lenght, beginning from September 2016. My name is Gìììì ììììì and I’m an undergraduate student currently attending the last of a three years BA degree in history of art. I have great expectations of growth and enrichment from this trainee experience abroad, which I believe to be an invaluable opportunity to have an insight into the world of museums and a hands-on experience to encompass with my theoretical preparation. My academic background includes a wide ranging survey of knowledge from Greek and Roman times up to nowadays postmodern artistic expressions. I’ve successfully achieved excellent results in 14 different courses, which spreads from history to literature besides history of art. I’ve particularly focused my attention on modern and contemporary art. I’ve cultivated my major interests in Italian Renaissance and Mannerism, with a special election for artists such as Michelangelo, Piero Di Cosimo, Leonardo, Raffaello etc. I’m also immensely fascinated by french XIX century art, XX century avantguardes, American abstract expressionism, '60s Italian and French artists. I am currently working on my bachelor thesis on Lucio Fontana. Critics like Fiedler, Hildebrand, Baudelaire, Warburg, Panofsky, Gombrich, Hauser, Schapiro, Greenberg, Adorno and many others have been my mentors and constant incentive to improve myself. I’ve always been trying to spread the spectra of my knowledge both breadth and depth with extra lectures, which helped me develop critic understanding and an intellectual engagement. Besides my academic studies I've also pursed language courses. In 2014 I have had the Ielts certificate in English with an overall band score of 7.5. I also learnt a bit of French and Spanish. However my versatility helps me to learn and understand easily different languages. I hope to learn and improve new languages with this abroad apprenticeship. I also have previous trainee experience. This year I’ve indeed participated as apprentice to an exhibition project at La Sapienza own Gypsortheque. The title of the exhibition was “Confluences. Antiquity and contemporaneity”. It gave me the opportunity to have curatorial insight and a physical engagement with masterpieces. I challenge myself in a direct contact with the public and artists. I enhance my expression and writing abilities by editing some interviews and reviews for online magazines of the faculty. This working opportunity I have had made me kindle the desire to be involved in museum life and carved my idea of future engagements with a career in galleries and museums. The vibrant atmosphere of Your museum, the possibility to learn in front of original works and to be at the forefront of research, is my highest ambition. My ultimate goal is to proof the knowledge I acquired at university could be transferable in practice successfully. I'm confident I will honor the opportunity with my insatiable curiosity to learn and my diligence. I will enclose my CV to this email for further informations. In case you will accept my request, I have to kindly ask You to complete, sign and send me back the ‘Training Agreement & Quality Commitment’ form attached. Please note that I have a 30 days deadline from now to communicate my university the destination and to submit them Your acceptance letter. If you need further information, please don't hesitate to contact ******** Head of the International Relations Office of La Sapienza university. Thank you for taking the time to consider this application. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. With kindest regards
 
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Hello community. I need to know whether I should have 2 or 3 body paragraphs for independent writing section of the TOEFL IBT test. My current structure is like this : Intro + 3 Body Paragraphs + Conclusion. Feedback is appreciated. Thanks in advance.
 
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I planned overtime leave take previous week, but I didn't take due to over work load, So that leave need to tomorrow and Tuesday for caring my sick child. So hence I request please approve 2days.
 
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I recently completed my GCSEs, securing passing grades in all subjects but Physics and Chemistry. I recently completed my GCSEs, securing passing grades in all subjects but two, Physics and Chemistry. I recently completed my GCSEs, securing passing grades in all subjects but two: Physics and Chemistry.
 
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"Initially, I was disappointed, but after a while, I resigned myself to the fact that I will never be proficient in Math, and this resignation has greatly helped me discover myself." "Initially, I was disappointed, but after a while, I resigned myself to the fact that I will never be proficient in Math, which has greatly helped me discover myself."
 
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I replying to hiring manager and would like to know if there are any grammer mistaked in my reply. ----------------- Many thanks for answering my questions. Your explanation was in great detail and really helped me understand the main responsibilities of this role. I have one other question on direct reports, after the transition of management responsibilities, would anyone directly report to me? ---------------
 
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Hi everybody! This is my very first question in the forum. I'm writing here to have some advices about my Erasmus+ traineeship motivation letter. What I should do is to ask a gallery/museum to pick me as apprentice. I'm obviously a BA history of art student from Italy. Please forgive my mistakes in the letter and just let me know if it is a complete disaster! Thank you for your patience, looking forward for your response. To whom it may concerns, My name is Giulia ++++a, I’m a nineteen years old student currently attending the third year of a BA degree in history of art in Rome, at La Sapienza University. I am writing in reference to the Erasmus Plus Europe financed program of traineeship abroad as an awarded student, with the aim to introduce myself as a trainee applicant for Your institution/Gallery/Museum. With this brief presentation I wish to hit this target . Being deeply keen on art has always been part of me. Therefore, when I was younger, I thought that my passion and sensitivity together with my good intuitions would have been my strong suits and the keys to achieve good results at university. However, my experience ended up to reveal me something different. I could write You about the several courses and exams I have had during these three years, which form the basis of my historical artistic knowledge. Ranging from ancient times up to nowadays, my studies have provided me a complete panoramic gaze on different artistic periods, which gave me a good overall competence in the field, with a personal preference towards modern and contemporary art. But focusing my attention on this sole element would mean to miss the real point of my brief but intense career and what I definitely advocate to make the difference in my experience from other students. In other words the most important lesson I learnt was the necessity to educate my great passion with discipline and precision, which I discovered the best way to exploit my potentials to the fullest. A precise methodical approach has therefore been my philosophy, which I would recognize in a Kant’s famous quote: “categories without intuitions are empties but intuitions without categories are blind.” Since “categories without intuitions are empties”, I perceive that garner the skill of a judicious and exact learning ability is still not enough. What I believe to be a truly commitment to excellence is an unceasing resolution and dedication in spreading the spectra of the basic knowledge provided by given courses with complementary critic lectures. Winckelmann, Ruskin, Fiedler, Hildebrand, Baudelaire, Warburg, Panofsky, Gombrich, Hauser, Schapiro, Greenberg, Adorno and many others have been true mentors to me. I have indeed tried to grasp the essence of their studies, which I consider to be the incitement to cultivate my own critic wit and brilliant intelligence. That extra mile that permits to go one step further, like they did, and to mould a great art historian. As You would desume from my words, I’ve been having an authentically abstract and theoretically-shaped education, which genuinely reflects an Italian mindset. After all art it self has either its abstract and concrete entity. But this is only one facet of what I perceive as a good art historian. The ultimate goal I expect from this Erasmus Plus experience is to succeed in combining my abstract knowledge with everyday reality of museum and artworks. I’m confident I would honor this opportunity, while paving my way for the future in which I hopefully envisage a brilliant art historian.
 
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Hello Teacher, Please help me the following sentence is correct or not. ques: I am sending Top 50 UAO Dealer on 31_Jul_2016. Kindly see the attached file. Please contact me if you have any requirement data about this report.
 
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Dear All, I know i may be asking a very vague question. May i know in your opinion, which sentence sound better. To efficiently organise the system to facilitate analysis. OR The difference is the word system and database. Thanks!
 
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the item xxx is available at supplier's company and I will import it together with other available item.
 
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Hello, Need some advice. English is not my first language. I'm very interested into copywriting(or maybe for the beginning just writing!?), and also understand to do that, I need to improve "somehow" my writing skills. I know, many of you will tell, just write, write, and there is a file section, but there are "tons" of materials, and I need some "baby steps" to start with! Which steps do you suggest to do in this situation? Also where to seek for someone who would help to correct errors on some topics? Thanks A
 
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