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How to asking a service letter from the current working company as a employeer
 
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I am Interested in applying to Carnegie Mellon in Pittsburgh, Princeton University, Rutgers University, University of Texas in Austin and MIT.As a student my strengths are solving logical questions, applying the sciences that I learn in my school in my daily life and have a decent command over English. I would like to major in Computer Science as it helps me apply my logical thinking in it and give me the freedom to do what I want to do. I am also good at understanding a new subject faster which is useful for Computer Science. I went to US in July 2015 to search about the different programs offered by different Universities. Before I went I was in a doubt whether I should take computer science or mechanical engineering. When I visited the Princeton University, I met a professor Rajiv Gandhi, who gave an insight of Computer Science. Then I realized the importance of Computer Science over Mechanical Engineering. In the aspect of the future 70% of the world population is going to be urbanized. Due to this the world will be needing quick and efficient solutions. A countries power is going to measures in term of how developed is the IT sector of a country, so there will be a rapid growth in the IT sector too. There are going to be many researches about the space so there will be a large requirement of satellites with a capacity to interpret a large amount of information per second, so the IT sector is required. As the world is going to move into a software type of world from a hardware one, the amount of Cyber Security required will also increase. So the demand for Software Solutions will be more than the present. I have attended a workshop called CS4 for Qatar hosted by CMU Qatar on February 6th 2016 which has reinforced my opinion to pursue Computer Science in Carnegie Mellon. There was a talk on the topic 'Computers in aid of criminal investigation' by a professor which motivated me more than before as the professor has walked us through the topic. The world is looking for more innovative ideas which can be easily expressed through Computer Science
 
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Hi, well i had an interview earlier on last week. Then i send a thankyou email and so on but they didn't reply about the hiring decision although they had told me they will. Now i wanted to inquire but i do not know how to start the email. It's like normally i would start by saying hope ur'e doing great. I wanted to inquire.... etc But it looks too frank, is there a formal way of saying the same or may be to say something else to start the email with??
 
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HI! Person A has asked me to pass his regards to Person B. Now, I'm writing a formal letter to person B. How should I pass person A's regards? Is it correct to say: "Mr. A asked me to convey his regards to you."
 
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Hello there, my name is Christoph and I am from Germany. I am applying for a Bachelors Program at a foreign university. Therefore I need to write a letter of motivation. I would be very grateful if a native speaker could go through it and give me some advice. Thank you very much in advance! ---- Dear ladies and gentlemen, I am writing to apply for the International Bachelor in Psychology in the ** University. My passion for psychology was ignited in middle school when I was voted as class representative and had to do a lot of mediation work. To increase my respective skills I read books about body language and quickly I realized how decisively a basic psychological understanding would help in terms of solving conflicts. In the following years I inquired further through books and conversations, eager to find what determines peoples’ mindsets. In grade eleven, I chose to write my scientific paper about “interpersonal relationships”. After my graduation I volunteered as an English teacher in a rural area of China for one year. There I learned to speak in front of classes with about 60 people and begun my studies of Chinese. Most of all however, I encountered the view on global problems from the perspective of a developing country. Especially inclined I became to the question why a vast majority of earths’ population seems to suffer from globalization while only a minority is profiting - during an age which accumulates more technology and knowledge that ever before. Driven by the question how I could connect my desire to solve that problem with my passion of psychology I interned first in a psychiatric clinic for six weeks and afterwards in a non-governmental organization for two months. I came to the conclusion that providing political and economic stakeholders with a profound psychological expertise would be the greatest contribution I could make to sustain earth and society. I am applying for the International Bachelor of Psychology in the ** University because the Problem-Based Learning teaches a combination of skills I regard as essential to reach my goals. Though I am very interested in a thorough understanding of psychological theories, I expect to encounter a lot of psychological problems during my work which will be new to me since I do aim for a career in the steadily changing fields of policy and economics. Rather than to be limited to a fixed amount of theories I embrace to learn the ability of creating own ideas so that I can provide tailor-made solutions for new problems. Similarly indispensable, I consider the international environment because experience gained abroad tend to have a very own intensity and the company of international fellows was always of great inspiration to me. I am looking forward to widen my horizon by dealing with a lot of very different points of view. Furthermore, I hope to build friendships with people who have similar intentions like me in later life. Besides that, an international environment combined with the exchange programs of **University bears the optimal conditions to set food in the realm of international work.
 
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Hey guys, after getting rejected twice because, in addition to my grades, my motivation letters were just bad (as I realized later), I'm trying my best to actually write a good motivation letter for the application for my Master's degree in English this time. I'm from Germany and did my Bachelor's degree in English at the same university I am applying for, I really want to stay there (not only because I like it a lot academic-wise, but also because of personal reasons). Unfortunately, my final score is 2,8 while they're looking for something around 2,5 but I am confident that I will achieve good grades when I'm accepted to this. I would greatly appreciate if some of you university-savvy guys could read this through and correct everything that comes to your mind, I would be eternally thankful. Cheers! Application for the Master’s degree in English (M.A. Anglistik/Amerikanistik) Dear Ladies and Gentlemen: I will graduate this month from this university, majoring in Communication Studies and minoring in English with a Bachelor of Arts degree. I am applying for your Master’s degree in English. My goal is to pursue a career in the music business, more precisely being employed in the senior staff at a sizable record label, working with international business partners and artists alike. My band’s manager has acquired a Master’s in English and has been successfully working in said field for 30 years, which I inspires me take a similar road. Over the course of my studies in XXXX (name of the city), I have developed an interest in extending my knowledge about linguistics and language and cognition. The university’s overview of your Master’s degree in English explicates to the possibility to specialize in those, which is a path that would help me broaden my communication skills, which are vital in my desired occupation. Also, there are obligatory research courses, for which methodology and statistics are surely required; two qualifications that I have acquired in my major subject, including the skill to conduct a study and analyze such data in the IBM SPSS software. Having only worked with media-related studies before, I am excited to how statistics can be applied to linguistic issues. Courses like Oral Presentation, Cognitive Linguistics and Translation are consistent with my aforementioned interest. Furthermore, a class that I really enjoyed and passed with good grades, Academic Writing, is recurring in the mandatory section of your Master’s program. Aside from how the contents fit my goals, the qualified way all English classes that I took were taught, the highly competent yet light-hearted academics and the university itself have provided me a desirable learning environment I absolutely want to stay in. As you may notice, this is not the first time I am applying. With a heavy heart I had to accept a letter of refusal from you twice. Subsequently, I have reflected the reasons you have stated, my previous letters of motivation and the following conversations I had with Mr Haas and the Master’s office. As a result, I feel like I have grown as a person in the meantime and not only gained a much clearer picture of what I want to achieve in my life, but also of what it takes to succeed in this degree. I am elaborating my desire to be a part of your Master’s program with a matured mindset this time. During my 6-week internship at the xxxxx GmbH (a company) at the end of 2014, I worked at the European Darts Championship in XXXX (city). I helped coordinate the communication to the respective managements of the players and international sponsoring partners, as well as co-wrote translations of advertisements, press texts and information sheets for participants from German to English. I imagine my grades as well as my final score may spark doubt in my eligibility to be suitable your Master’s program, but I would be grateful if you allowed me to elaborate on this. First, in retrospect, looking at the person I was during my previous studies, including the personal circumstances affecting me, I see my former self as not sorted out enough to achieve the grades I could have had if I had my responsibilities figured out. While I deeply enjoyed the learning environment at our university, back then I had difficulties finding a way to cope with performing well in both my major and minor subject soon enough. Secondly, I was under pressure to build the foundation to my music career, because a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity had appeared: A label believes in my band’s music and was willing to fund and release our debut album. Even though the resulting balancing act between my academic career and my music career was a challenge that affected my grades negatively, it helped me develop skills that I would not have achieved under easier circumstances. Being the band leader, I successfully arranged many production-related tasks involving more than 20 people, some of those being international audio engineers and musicians. Being the lyricist, I wrote a whole concept album surrounding an epic story in the short amount of time left, resulting in positive reviews complimenting my creativity and use of the English language. Lastly, being a student, I experienced what amount of strength is needed to complete two tremendous responsibilities that both require my undivided attention. Since a few weeks, the music-related duties in my life have shifted to playing live instead of creating new music for the next two years, which is significantly less stressful and time-consuming, allowing me to completely focus on my studies. I am confident that now I am able to put in the labor needed to succeed in the Master’s program. All of my experiences, as well as learning from my mistakes, have shaped me into the valuable student I aspire to be; a student that would give his best to let this university benefit from a positive decision following this application. I would be honored to be allowed to continue my studies at this university. Thank you for your time, I look forward to your answer. Yours faithfully, colorfulanimal ...
 
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I've been looking into formal writing lately. How does one learn the formal register? Where does one start? Do I just start reading research and business papers? I find those things incredible dull and wouldn't want to spend lots of the time reading those. Now I do understand that learning can't always be fun but there should be other ways to learn this. I did notice that phrasal verbs are avoided in formal writing, which is a good thing because untill today, I haven't had a clue what a phrasal verb is. So the first thing that I have to do is learning new verbs that can replace phrasal verbs. After I am done with that, what should I do then? What would you guys suggest?
 
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Hi, Can any one help me correct this phrase, please? I am not sure it is good or not: "Too much thanks for your kind help" Thanks
 
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Jobs that do not require high-level education do not mean that there is less intelligence involved in these fields.
 
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Hello everyone and happy new year! I need some assistance in writing a motivation letter for a Masters Degree. I would much appreciate it if you guys could help me proofread and share any useful comments that could help me improve it. This is the first draft of my first letter ever. Thanks so much for any help! Here it is: Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying to your Master Programme in International Law starting in September 2016. My goal is to build a career as an international civil servant focused on human rights and international law-making. My interest in helping others and promoting justice have led me to a chose a career in Law. Short after beginning law school I volunteered at the university’s pro bono law firm, where I learned practical skills and was able to help less fortunate people with their legal issues. Although I chose to study law I have always been very interested in international relations, for that reason I have participated in activities that relate to that filed, such as Model United Nations (MUN) events and the Y20 Youth Summit. As part of my goal to have an international career I chose to learn french and in 2011 I achieved level B2 at Alliance Française. I thrive in a multicultural environment where I am able to help others and generate positive impact. Since a young age I have studied in international schools, where I was able to interact with people from all over the world. During middle and high school I started participating in various MUN events and in 2007 I attended the Harvard MUN representing the island of Kiribati. When chosen to represent Brazil in the Y20 Youth Summit, I worked in collaboration with the delegation of Indonesia to approve a clause on women’s rights in the workplace. During the conference I had the opportunity of working together with people from various backgrounds and nationalities to plan, organize and negotiate the terms of a communique with the most pressing global issues for young people. During Law School I chose to take “Peacekeeping Operations”, an elective course from the International Relations programme. I really enjoyed the experience and scored an average grade of 9,5 out of 10 in that subject. This positive result motivated me even more to pursue a career where I could combine law and international relations. My final semester of Law School was dedicated to researching and writing my thesis about the compatibility of the Brazilian Amnesty Law in face of the national law system and the Inter-American Human Rights System. I received the maximum grade for my work. Before graduation I was approved in the Brazilian BAR examination and became a certified lawyer. During my internship at the State’s Attorney Office I had the chance to get closely involved with the difficulties that affect my country. As a public servant I interacted with less fortunate people that seeked to be compensated by government. I was able to notice how an inefficient system has the power to damage the lives of people who need it the most. My experience as intern strengthened my interest in learning from an international institution what can be done to change flawed government systems that decelerate the developing world. While my academic career is very important to me, I also like to engage in extracurricular activities. I enjoy supporting animal rights causes and promoting adoption. Rio de Janeiro has a growing vegetarian and vegan community, in 2015 I helped elaborate and promote a specialised meet free menu. Moreover, I am interested in causes that promote health and quality of life, for that reason I participate and volunteer in an international foundation that teaches yoga and meditation. I want to study at the xxx because it combines in an unique way various factors that I value in an institution: strong tradition, outstanding reputation in teaching world affairs, an exclusive location in the international city of xxx and solid career prospects after graduation. Most of all, the Institute gives me the opportunity to combine the disciplinary Master of International Law with subjects from other disciplines, such as international relations. I strongly value the opportunity to learn from other disciplines and for that reason I successfully applied for the Winter Programme xxx and am very eager to start. Since before starting university it was clear I wanted to build an international career focused on building a better society, for that reason I believe my mission resonates with the Institute’s. To achieve my goals I have made choices that would help me become a better professional. My background in international events and my experience in working for the government will likely enrich the classe discussions. Furthermore, my upbringing in an emerging country will add diversity to the program. Thank you for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your acceptance. Yours faithfully,
By Gabbieteechr  
 
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On March 02, 2016 EMS General Supervisor visited the projects to give us some healthy instructions, check the camp restaurants, bathrooms and water resources if there was any lack. The instruction of EMS general Supervisor as follows: 1- Poultry farming should be transfer out of the camp. 2- Restaurants workers did not wear gloves when applying the service food. 3- Inside refrigerators were unclear. 4- Poultry farming in the camp must be cancelled because chickens and rooster exposed the staff of our project to Influenza A virus sub-type H5N1. 5- Tea-room worker must wear a special clothes not with his formal clothes. 6- Towels which are used for cleaning must be changed with a new one weekly.
 
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Please let us know at what time we can proceed with the activity
 
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We thankful for all you done for us. We are not the only family want to get to XXXX but we deserve to live with a civilized people like XXXX not only my family but also all of Kurd are open mind and they can integration quickly into Western society. On the other hand we thankful to you and admins of this group to make us join and see so kind posts out of humanitarian concern.
 
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please check this paragraph, is it right grammar and vocabulary? "My decision to apply to the postgraduate program in the University of x Institute for aeronautical Studies is a culmination of my lifelong passion for aeronautics. I first fell in love with airplanes when I was four years old. It was my first time that I have saw airplane in the sky, I was not very sure why these great things did not fall from the sky. At the age of ten, I tried to make my first airplane from aluminum cans and reeds. Despite my enthusiasm, my first crude models could never fly, though that did not stop my imagination or my passion .It was therefore natural for me to choose Aeronautical Engineering as my major. As my awareness of various concepts of aeronautical engineering grew my zeal understand them in greater detailed heightened. My undergraduate course has provided me with a firm foundation of the basic principles of aeronautical engineering and the courses in Engineering Mechanics of machinery, Thermodynamics, Fluiddynamic, aerodynamic & gas dynamic, have provided commendable ground work for advanced study. I also enhanced my software skills in PRO-E, ANSYS and matlab therefore I decided to take aeronautical ENGINEERING as my field of specialization for my graduate study. I believe that x countries are perfect place for studying engineering. Since your University Good reputation of high quality education standards, an extremely distinguished faculty members and research facilities are the factors which have motivated me to choose for my M.Sc. studies the x. I have decided to place my application for Master degree program here. After I read carefully the curriculum and the course requirements, I believe that it perfectly matches my research interests and profile. Thanks to the University website, I gained useful information about the University campus and the student life. Bearing in mind the previous I believe I can fit perfectly achieving ideal academic results. I consider myself to be a good candidate, because I am young, energetic, hardworking, visionary, and motivated person who believes that I can do something for the benefit of my country to whom I have been working. I did my best with all maximum efforts I could give for my institution. But this is not enough. Frankly, I am not satisfied yet with what I did. I believe that I can do much better if I am trained and developed through a master of aeronautical engineering in x".
 
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Please check this piece that I have written. It is the introduction to an essay on the topic 'science has an uneasy relationship with culture' Culture is a feature of society that is all about tradition and ancestory. The preservation of ancestorial traditions and their practice is what we call culture. In today's world we only see a few communities practicing their traditions and preserving their cultures. Science, on the other hand, is about facts. Science gives us factual evidence on everything it finds. From molecules to Mars, science proves all of its findings. Science an technology are rapidly developing today. Scientists and physicians are now putting their brains together to gain knowledge and understand everything that fits inside the loose bounds of the universe. That also includes culture. As science tries to understand culture, it becomes the reason for their being only a few communities who practice their traditions.
 
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Analyze the sentence to determine the main clause and the subordinate clause. Then choose the function of the subordinate clause. It is not right to make a promise unless you are sure you can fulfill the promise.
 
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What is the difference between wait and await?
 
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Please help me correct this application for leave letter. I would like to take leave for 25 odd days to attend a marriage. Dear Sir I would like to request for leave as I have to attend my cousin sisters marriage at our native. I shall be highly obliged if you can permit me to take leave from 28 th of October to 20 th of November. Thank you Regards Max
 
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letter of Inquiry for seeking jobs Dear Sir, I am interested in working for your organization and pursuing my lifetime career in an organization such as your company. I am familiar with the work in your field, and I believe that I will become an integral member of your team which, help refugees, and in response to the current humanitarian refugee crisis in Europe In my student period, I worked with the local council the municipality in Dover, UK. My duties included supporting and providing care for all isolated vulnerable individuals, especially unaccompanied minors in translate their needs and establish communication links with the refugees to ensure good two-way communication between the refugees and those assisting them. My most recent role was at Hauptbahnhof Refugee Centre(Train of hope) as a volunteer Architect, Preparing temporary shelters working with infrastructure team working closely with community groups has allowed me to develop a broad range of skills from brief gathering through coordination and liaising with other parties including the transportation, social media and medical treatment and legal advice. I was a founder and director of AAC Architectural consultancy based firm in Iraq/Erbil with providing integrated professional services and expertise, My role has delivered a significant number of complex housing projects of outstanding architectural quality. I also worked with UAE Red Cross based in Erbil in Bahraka Refugee Camp and these have been concentrated mainly housing schemes, healthcare, and schools. I believe that with my knowledge of architecture, I will be able to fully utilize my skills and expertise excellent skills of communication with my native speaker of Arabic, Persian, Russian and Turkish while making a valuable contribution to Caritas. I would like to work with your long established organization and gain further experience and enhance my knowledge in the field of providing facilities to support refugees and other immigrants. I am enclosing my CV detailing my relevant skills and experience.
 
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Is this sentence correct? Some people say universities are places to study hard while others say to enjoy your life.
 
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What to say to comfort someone when you are uncertain his situation? My boss's dog is sick or maybe dying from what I heard that I'm not sure , I wanted to say something in text message to him but not sure what to say. Is it okay to say "thinking of you, your dog. I’m here if you need me."?
 
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Work that is not finished is not work at all, it is merely a botch, a failure. Is this sentence grammatical correct? Should there be a semicolon after all?
 
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I am interested in this opportunity because I am a part of this youth and I want to share and obtain other skills in the field of arts and crafts and eco tourism as well. I believe my mission will help motivate and inspire young artists through art workshops and trainings/I look forward to working with many aspiring youth. After completion of this project I have idea to organize art workshop just with short period in the villages in my country to promote awareness of teen artists in our community.
 
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can anyone advise me in how to land a job like houseman ..
 
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when give me fees structure
 
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