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is it okay to say 'this is the very first time' academically?
 
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May I use "He" for high spiritual leaders like Dalai Lama?
 
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Hi guys! ^^ Could you check if there's something wrong in/with?? this piece? I'm not a loyal partner. I have done you wrong in return to having done me wrong. I'm not blaming you and I won't blame you. I just knew you were losing me. And there have been times you failed to see that. You have trusted me so much that you forget to doubt me and my actions. I was caged and free at the same time. And now I'm wandering somewhere deep inside me, thinking if the time has finally come to surcease what's been called 'us'. I am praying not for the best thing to happen, but for the right one to.
 
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Hi there~ I am wondering whether the titles below are correct both grammatically and in meaning. Would you take a look at and check them? Your comments will be much appreciated. Thanks~ ! pb The tiltles are : A Study of the United Operation of the Bibliotherapy Program with the Cooperation of Public Libraries and Communities --- Focused on the Case of Public Libraries of the Seoul Metropolitan Office of Education
 
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At present we require XXX and XXX only. I will order your offer items as soon as possible that are out of stock. The actual quantity of XXX is 660 bottle and please send me revised invoice.
 
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Could you please tell me if this letter is grammatical, natural and correctly written according to North American English standards? Name Address Contact no: 334545465468 Email: Email Removed April 02, 2016 ATTN: Graduate Selection Committee I am writing this to inform you that I am interested in applying at the XXX University for M.A.Sc. program in Materials Engineering, which is a program of study situated in INS Institute for Mechanical & Aerospace Engineering (IMAE). I am a fresh graduate from XYZ University of Engineering and Technology, Karachi, Pakistan. I completed Bachelors of Engineering in the field of Metallurgical Engineering and passed the requisite exams held in the year 2015. The degree was conferred to me on 11th March 2016. Right from the very beginning, I always tried my best to be at the top of my academic career, and fortunately, I have always been in the top three throughout my primary and secondary education. I developed interest in metallurgical engineering when I was obtaining secondary school education. There was a chapter named “Metals: Properties and Production” in one of our physics class, the teacher was explaining the topic which I carefully listened with a sound mind and determination like never before, as I always had a curiosity as a kid about materials that surrounds me and always showed greater interest to understand the phenomenon behind the making of tools, machinery, electronic gadgets and different utensils. I always thought how the bodies of these things came to their existence with the intended properties and how the materials are produced like the way they are, and this is possibly the best way to describe how I discovered my passion in material science or simply being specific, in metallurgy. At that time, my motivation to choose metallurgy was further excelled when I was awarded with the title of “student of physics” for obtaining highest marks in the given subject. At that day I realized my field of interest, therefore, I decided to choose Metallurgical Engineering for my engineering career as my undergraduate major with the vision to follow my obsession. I never took my field as granted but tried to develop the most of my abilities in Metallurgy. From the first year of under-graduation, I started learning many courses on material science, understood the art of how different metals can be extracted which is later used for household or infrastructure purposes, learned different subjects throughout academics including physical metallurgy, extractive metallurgy, inspection and testing of materials, characterization of materials, polymers and composite materials, powder metallurgy, fracture mechanics & failure analysis of materials and many more. I have worked diligently these past four years to increase my understanding so to cope with these subjects, and I have greatly enjoyed the process. I wish to study and to do research in extractive metallurgy, physical metallurgy, heat treatment of materials, fracture mechanics and failure analysis of materials, advanced materials, powder metallurgy and corrosion of materials so I can further investigate and contribute to the understanding of various physical and chemical phenomena encountered in Materials Engineering. Due to this reason, I primarily intent Dr. XYZ or Dr. ERX to supervise my research. On the contrary, if neither of their supervision is possible then I would like Dr OIPA to supervise my thesis based program. During my graduation, I also took part in various engineering projects namely design and preparation of mini-hydro electric generator and preparation of mini sand casting mold. I have also gained industrial experience when I was in third year, I was appointed as an intern at a hot rolling mill, where hot rolled steel bars were being made. My internship report covers all aspects of the mill. My motivation and commitment for pursuing M.A.Sc. in materials is not only because of developing the earlier interest in the given field but also due to the outstanding experience I endured about learning this field, which was further inclined by acquiring 2nd position overall with a CGPA of 3.86 out of 4 in my batch of 2011-12. My future goals are simple and that is to see myself in top positions in engineering arena by learning more and more about the subject of material science and engineering. I show interest to dedicate myself in research and aspire for such a career because I want to rise above the conventional mainstream and do something worthwhile which will serve towards a better world for us and generations to come. To achieve accordingly, I personally believe that the XXX University is the best out there, where I would like to pursue my masters, receiving a degree from such acclaimed and renowned institute would be really beneficial in achieving my academic goals. On the other side, this is the best way for me to have a cultural exchange experience that I had dreamed of as a child receiving primary education. I am highly motivated towards research in materials science, I never got a chance to work under a research supervisor, if I get appointed, it would be my first experience which I will grasp fully in whatever conditions or situations which shall be assigned to me. I believe I can be a great value to this institute because I always try with the fullest potential to top the table and thankfully I always have been, that I can demonstrate by my grades and certificates of excellence. In addition to the merit position during my undergrad career, I had also spent the last year of my graduation as an undergraduate researcher in understanding the flow mechanics and chemistry of pig iron in blast furnace and for this purpose I took my final year project which was to design and develop laboratory scale blast furnace for small scale pig iron production. Fortunately, our project group did finish designing and developing the furnace but our group hadn’t produced pig iron of required compositions due to some financial issues of maintaining the flow chemistry of the product. Our project supervisor praised the fact that we had completed designing and fabricating the complex structure of the furnace and thus called off the production, which required extra amount of money to obtain the final products. The juniors are now working on it. The education so far I received in materials engineering subjects, stood as a second position holder in the batch, confidence in my abilities, intellectual competence, requisite skills and my keen interest for learning more about materials demonstrates that I am an excellent fit for M.A.Sc. Program at XXX University. I have researched the program and determined that the coursework and research profile of the college are a perfect match to my academic profile. The excellent research facilities combined with appropriate faculty guidance at this university, offer me a definite opportunity to complete my graduate studies. I would really appreciate if you consider my graduate application in light of my academic achievements and supervise my research. Thank you, Name.
 
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I have completed my SSLC (10th grade) in school, I want to write a letter to School to issue me a TC for further college admission... Please help me with the format?
 
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Hello Everyone, My name is Tania and I'm an affabling, smiling woman of 36 years old who has many ideas. This blog,which I'll share with you with pleasure, is the beginning of a wonderful adventure for me. This blog aims to explain you how I'll be able to take care of your pets. I'll take care of them by offering home visits for your pets. Professional petsitter, I have the «  Certificat de Capcité des Animaux Domestiques » for the cats. In a close future, I'll have this « Certificat » for the dogs. For me, each pet is unique and each pet merits all of my attentions. You have to be away ( holidays, weekend, professional imperative, hospitalisation), I'll offer you home visits in the greatest respect of your private life to take care of your pet in the best conditions. I'll offer you an invidualized assistance. I'll commit to observing all of your advices and the habits of your pet. Before everything, offering you the best is to know you.
 
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Could you pleace check my below company description and correct my mistakes if there are any ? Thank you "In all parts of the XXX COMPANY production plants, from the entry of raw materials to the packaging of the final products, the modern and innovative technologies in conformity with the international quality standards are implemented. The products grown in their natural circumstances are processed without harming their naturalness and are improved as final products. XXX COMPANY which initiated the continuous consumption of the dry figs during 4 seasons became one of the firms having a voice in the dry food sector thanks to its recent R&D activities. XXX COMPANY has adopted the vision of to have a good agriculture and the right raw material for obtaining the product of better quality. The products which were not collected on time and those who are not dried properly lack quality and taste. Being a competent firm in its field XXX COMPANY protects the naturalness of the products during the production made by using modern technologies and offers the products to its customers in their most natural states"
 
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last but not least ,sports by it all types are very beneficial helpful in many ways and can br practiced anywhere anytime by anyone in case to have a healthy and happy life .
 
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Is there any way of abbreviating the term "telephone number" which is recognised as more correct in British English than other ways? I've seen "Phone 12345", "Phone: 12345", "Tel. 12345", Tel.: 12345" and others, and am wondering which one to choose for letterheads. Also, are country code, area code and own number just separated by a space, or would it be more correct to put a hyphen or slash in between? Thanks!
 
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I need help. There was a notice in work that said there was a new contract and I have to apply in writing. Please help
 
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could anybody help me to write a conclusion about sports please ?
 
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Hi I'm reading A Crime in the Neighbourhood , Suzanne Berne, which is set in East Coast US, 1970s. One of the women is trying to run a home business with Peterman-Wolff. It sounds like a kind of catalogue business. I can't find it on the web. Does anyone have any information on this - what kind of business that was? Thanks, Dave
 
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Could you please tell me if this statement of intent is grammatical, natural and correctly written according to North American English standards? I am doubtful about punctuation marks mainly. Name Address Contact no: 123 Email: Email Removed April 02, 2016 ATTN: Graduate Selection Committee I am writing this to inform you that I am interested in applying at the XYZ University for M.A.Sc. program in Materials Engineering, which is a program of study situated in XXX Department (UISNS). I am a fresh graduate from XDF University of Engineering and Technology, Karachi, Pakistan. I completed Bachelors of Engineering in the field of Metallurgical Engineering and passed the requisite exams held in the year 2015. The degree was conferred to me on 18th March 2016. Right from the very beginning, I always tried my best to be at the top of my academic career, and fortunately, I have always been in the top three throughout my primary and secondary education. I developed interest in metallurgical engineering when I was obtaining secondary school education. There was a topic of “Metals” in one of our physics class, the teacher was explaining the topic which I carefully listened with a sound mind and determination like never before, as I always had a curiosity as a kid about materials that surrounds me and always showed greater interest to understand the phenomenon behind the making of tools, machinery, electronic gadgets and different utensils. I always thought how the body of these things came to its existence and how the materials are produced like the way they are and this is possibly the best way to describe how I discovered my passion in material science or simply being specific, in metallurgy. At that time, my motivation to choose metallurgy was further excelled when I was awarded with the title of “student of physics” for obtaining highest marks in the given subject. At that day I realized my field of interest, therefore, I decided to choose Metallurgical Engineering for my engineering career as my undergraduate major with the vision to follow my obsession. I never took my field as granted but tried to develop the most of my abilities in Metallurgy. From the first year of under-graduation, I started learning many courses on material science, understood the art of how different metals can be extracted which is later used for household or infrastructure purposes, learned different subjects throughout academics including physical metallurgy, extractive metallurgy, inspection and testing of materials, characterization of materials, polymers and composite materials, powder metallurgy, fracture mechanics & failure analysis of materials and many more. I have worked diligently these past four years to increase my understanding so to cope with these subjects, and I have greatly enjoyed the process. I wish to study and to do research in extractive metallurgy, physical metallurgy, heat treatment of materials, fracture mechanics and failure analysis of materials, advanced materials, and corrosion of materials so I can further investigate and contribute to the understanding of various physical and chemical phenomena encountered in Materials Engineering. Due to this reason, I primarily intent Dr. XTY or Dr. LPO to supervise my research. On the contrary if neither of their supervision is not possible then I would like Dr WER to supervise my thesis based program. During my graduation, I also took part in various engineering projects namely design and preparation of mini-hydro electric generator and preparation of mini sand casting mold. I have also gained industrial experience when I was in third year, I was appointed as an intern at a hot rolling mill, where hot rolled steel bars were being made. Their, I understood about the different processes on the floor. I also gathered practical knowledge regarding the criteria of inspection and testing of raw materials supplied and final product thus obtained by rolling. My internship report covers all aspects as described above. My motivation and commitment for pursuing M.A.Sc. in materials is not only because of developing the earlier interest in the given field but also due to the outstanding experience I endured about learning this field, which was further inclined by acquiring 2nd position overall with a CGPA of 3.87 out of 4 in my batch. My future goals are simple and that is to see myself in top positions in engineering arena by learning more and more about the subject of material science and engineering. I show interest to dedicate myself in research and aspire for such a career because I want to rise above the conventional mainstream and do something worthwhile which will serve towards a better world for us and generations to come. To achieve accordingly, I personally believe that the Carleton University is the best out there, where I would like to pursue my masters, receiving a degree from such acclaimed and renowned institute would be really beneficial in achieving my academic goals. On the other side, this is the best way for me to have a cultural exchange experience that I had dreamed of as a child receiving primary education. I am highly motivated towards research in materials science, I never got a chance to work under a research supervisor, if I get appointed, it would be my first experience which I will grasp fully in whatever conditions or situations which shall be assigned to me. I believe I can be a great value to this institute because I always try with the fullest potential to top the table and thankfully I always have been, that I can demonstrate by my grades and certificates of excellence. In addition to the merit position during my undergrad career, I had also spent the last year of my graduation as an undergraduate researcher in understanding the flow mechanics and chemistry of pig iron in blast furnace and for this purpose I took my final year project which was to design and develop laboratory scale blast furnace for small scale pig iron production. Fortunately, our project group did finish designing and developing the furnace but our group hadn’t produced pig iron of required compositions due to some financial issues of maintaining the flow chemistry of the product. Our project supervisor praised the fact that we have completed designing and fabricating the complex structure of the furnace and thus called off the production, which required extra amount of money to obtain the final products. The juniors are now working on it. The education so far I received in materials engineering subjects, stood as a second position holder in the batch, confidence in my abilities, intellectual competence, requisite skills and my keen interest for learning more about materials demonstrates that I am an excellent fit for M.A.Sc. Program at XYZ University. I have researched the program and determined that the coursework and research profile of the college are a perfect match to my academic profile. The excellent research facilities combined with appropriate faculty guidance at this university, offer me a definite opportunity to complete my graduate studies. I would really appreciate if you consider my graduate application in light of my academic achievements and supervise my research. Thank you, Name.
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I therefore request you to update of my address and kindly resend us a letter in order to obtain of Police Clearance Certificate.
 
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Dears, I want to send email to HR department for Advance annual leave payment, could you please write one draft for my annual leave payment for 2016 Thanks, MT
 
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hello guys: I just want to ask suggestion about my letter and if i do it correctly. Thankz in regards. Good day! I am writing this letter to ask your permission if you could allow me to pursue my studies. To enhance my skills and knowledge I am going to take master’s degree in Management at Palompon Institute of Technology (PIT) for School Year 2016-2017. In line, may it be possible for me to be excused from my work during Saturday. To cover up my absences during Saturday, I will extend my working time every Monday to Thursday. Instead of 7:30am -12:00nn and 1:30pm – 5:00pm, I will make it 7:00am -12:00nn and 1:00pm – 5:00pm. May this be effective on June 13, 2016. Hoping for your kind consideration. I’m looking forward for your positive response. Thank you and God bless.
 
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I think the order unit on your invoice should be box. Otherwise, Is pcs and box the same quantity ?
 
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I am applying for a bocholers degree in computer system and the university wants me to write a motivation letter so how should i write it? Thanks in advance.
 
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Dear Sir, I beg to state that I am ........., saving account number ..... On 16th May, 2016 your bank informed me that some money (€ 500) have sent me my foster parent from Netherlands. He sent this amount for my birthday gift. Last year he also sent me some money for my birthday gift in my account. Mr. X is a Dutch, 68 years old, lives in Netherlands with his family. He is my foster parent. I will ensure you that if my sender wants to back from me this amount of money I will give him. Therefore, I would like to request you please take necessary steps for this purpose so that I can receive the money as soon as possible.
 
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hi, plz help me .i wanna write a letter for leave to the principle of our school where i work as data entry operator. here what i write. Sir, i am writing this letter to inform you that i am in need of one day leave on 21st May for personal reason. Sincerely yours, [name]
 
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i confirm my joining on 21st may or i confirm the joining on 21st may
 
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Can Someone help me my below email? I want to confirm my Financial manager for contracting with XYZ company, Dear Sir, The XYZ company has cleared all their monthly internet charges only the May month is not paid ( the may month charges is remain ) so I would you confirm that we can sign a renewal contract with mention company.
 
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Dear Mam/Sir, Further to your recent enquiry I am able to quote for the prize of the scrap. We are pleased to submit the following bid quotation: • Karton - 3.00 • Plastic - 5.00 • Sibak - 12.00 • News Paper- 4.00 • Waste - 1.00 • Ifanta - 20.00 • Bakal - 6.00 • Puti (Papel) - 8.00 Please feel free to get in touch with me at 09326197529 about any of the specifics of this quotation. Again, thank you for considering Dedeng’s Junk Shop. This quotation remains valid for the next 30 days. Yours faithfully, Evelyn V. Bautista The Owner
 
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