Hello, would appreciate if you could advise the below letter to request for quotation from the government;

Dear Mr. Pang,

SUB: Quotation

With reference to the above-mentioned, we would like to request for a formal quotation on fire drill and first aid. We would be very much appreciate if you could provide us the quotation at the earliest.

For further information please do not hesitate to contact us.

Thank you.
Hi guys, would appreciate if you could check on the above letter. Thanks again.
Dear Mr. Pang,

SUB: Quotation

With reference to the above-mentioned, We would like to request for a formal quotation for fire drill and first aid. (It's not clear what you want - training courses, equipment, management services, what? You can't buy just 'fire drill' or 'first aid'.)

We would be very much appreciate if you could provide us with the quotation as soon as possible.

Please do not hesitate to contact us for further information .

Yours sincerely,