Formal Letter To University Asking For Information?

Just thinking one sentence "sounds" awkward because of the "appreciate" and "indicate". Too many "ates".

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to request more information about your Film and Media studies.

I am (something) student from Argentina. Next year I am planning to study at your university. Could you please indicate which initiation exams (or other prerequisites) are required to study Film and Media courses?

Thank you for your kind consideration, and I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully,
Viktorija

Red text is optional, less the brackets.

Please tell me is this correct or not? ASAP!!!!!
(address)
The Department Of Fine Arts At The University Of _____,
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I would be kindly obliged if you pay a little attention toward my letter. I am ____, studying in______College;Mumbai(India) in _____ Stream.
I would be very thankful if you could just help me out with the admission procedure and scholarships your University.

I want to pursue Journalism as my future career, primarily focusing on Fashion magzines. I am currently in my 12th Grade, i have my subjects selected as follows:
Physics, Chemistry, Biology,English, Hindi. I have always spent my time reflecting on my university life. Due to my fathers sudden death, I was unable to perform good in my examinations
and this bought a drop in my grades. Now I regret my failures and I would like to start over again. I am sure that I am now capable of tertiary study and I will do my best in every subject I enroll for next year.
Could you please indicate which initiation exams or other prerequisites I require.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours Faithfully,
__________

We would like to enquiry the below course question as below;

Barge Supervisor and Ballast Control course

Course Schedule and price.

Your reply email with details information would be much appreciated.

We would like to enquiry the below course question as below;

Barge Supervisor and Ballast Control course

Course Schedule and price.

Your reply email with details information would be much appreciated.

Here, the above letter mentioned the name with a XXX, which meant that she or he doesn't want to express her or his title! XXX are not kisses 😄😄😄

95 Zamora street

Meycauayan

3020 Bulacan

May 4, 2013

The director

Bureau of plant industry

691 San andres, Manila

1017 Manila

Dear Mam/Sir,

I have a problem with three mango tree in my yard. The trees seem to be perfectly healthy they bloom heavily every year, but the blossoms never develop into fruit. They all turn brown and soon dry up. Would you advice spraying them with insecticide? If so, how should I go about it and what insecticide should I use? The trees are over twenty feet tall. Do I need pump? If so, what kind of pump should I use? May I further be advised as to what inexpensive equipment to use?

Thank you for the many information you can give me.

- Anonymous

please, tell me, is it correct?

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am percussionist from Ukraine and I am going to apply to your music academy on the undergraduate program.

Could you please tell me how many students do you enroll on percussion major?

Do yo practice given master classes during a shool year before admission? I am plan to arrive in mid-January and I wood like to get master class of the percussionist of your department, is it possible?

I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

(my name)