Hello, I don't know if my letter is correct... And maybe it's too short.
I want that someone would tell his\her opinion
Thanks.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you to get more information about Film and Media
studies in XXX university.
I am 11th form student from (country). Next year I am planning to study
in your university. I would be pleasant if you could tell me which initiation exams
are required to study Film and Media courses.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Viktorija XXX
I want that someone would tell his\her opinion

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you to get more information about Film and Media
studies in XXX university.
I am 11th form student from (country). Next year I am planning to study
in your university. I would be pleasant if you could tell me which initiation exams
are required to study Film and Media courses.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Viktorija XXX
Short is good.
Dear Sir or Madam, (In North America, we use a colon for formal letters, and a comma for informal. Here, you are okay with either.)
I am writing you toget request more information about your Film and Media studies in XXX university.
I am (11th form ... don't understand 11th form? from?, please explain) student from (country). Next year I am planning to studyin at your university. I would be pleasant appreciate if you could tell me indicate which initiation exams are required to study Film and Media courses.
I am looking forward to receiving your response.hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Viktorija XXX (No need to send kisses)
I am assuming you had an earlier typo "from".
I am the 11th student from Venezuela. (Venezuela only has 11 students?) I think you meant to say something else. Please try this sentence again.
Dear Sir or Madam, (In North America, we use a colon for formal letters, and a comma for informal. Here, you are okay with either.)
I am writing you to
I am (11th form ... don't understand 11th form? from?, please explain) student from (country). Next year I am planning to study
I am looking forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Viktorija XXX (No need to send kisses)
I am assuming you had an earlier typo "from".
I am the 11th student from Venezuela. (Venezuela only has 11 students?) I think you meant to say something else. Please try this sentence again.
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request more information about your Film and Media studies.
I am (something) student from Argentina. Next year I am planning to study at your university. Could you please indicate which initiation exams (or other prerequisites) are required to study Film and Media courses?
Thank you for your kind consideration, and I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours faithfully,
Viktorija
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(address)
The Department Of Fine Arts At The University Of _____,
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I would be kindly obliged if you pay a little attention toward my letter. I am ____, studying in______College;Mumbai(India) in _____ Stream.
I would be very thankful if you could just help me out with the admission procedure and scholarships your University.
I want to pursue Journalism as my future career, primarily focusing on Fashion magzines. I am currently in my 12th Grade, i have my subjects selected as follows:
Physics, Chemistry, Biology,English, Hindi. I have always spent my time reflecting on my university life. Due to my fathers sudden death, I was unable to perform good in my examinations
and this bought a drop in my grades. Now I regret my failures and I would like to start over again. I am sure that I am now capable of tertiary study and I will do my best in every subject I enroll for next year.
Could you please indicate which initiation exams or other prerequisites I require.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours Faithfully,
__________
We would like to enquiry the below course question as below;
Barge Supervisor and Ballast Control course
Course Schedule and price.
Your reply email with details information would be much appreciated.
We would like to enquiry the below course question as below;
Barge Supervisor and Ballast Control course
Course Schedule and price.
Your reply email with details information would be much appreciated.
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May 4, 2013
The director
Bureau of plant industry
691 San andres, Manila
1017 Manila
Dear Mam/Sir,
I have a problem with three mango tree in my yard. The trees seem to be perfectly healthy they bloom heavily every year, but the blossoms never develop into fruit. They all turn brown and soon dry up. Would you advice spraying them with insecticide? If so, how should I go about it and what insecticide should I use? The trees are over twenty feet tall. Do I need pump? If so, what kind of pump should I use? May I further be advised as to what inexpensive equipment to use?
Thank you for the many information you can give me.
- Anonymous
please, tell me, is it correct?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am percussionist from Ukraine and I am going to apply to your music academy on the undergraduate program.
Could you please tell me how many students do you enroll on percussion major?
Do yo practice given master classes during a shool year before admission? I am plan to arrive in mid-January and I wood like to get master class of the percussionist of your department, is it possible?
I look forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
(my name)