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Hello, I am pursuing the Global Korea Scholarship (GKS) that requires me to write a personal statement. If you have time please help me to correct my writing either the grammar or content. I really appreciate your help, thank you.

PERSONAL STATEMENT

o Motivations with which you apply for this program

o Your education and work experience

o Reason for studying in Korea

o Any other aspects of your background and interests which may help us evaluate your aptitude and passion for graduate study or research.


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Until we're educating every kid in a fantastic way, until every inner city is cleaned up, there is no shortage of things to do.-Bill gates.

I was a child with an open-minded family who got motivated by my father to go overseas. They particularly were not a strict family type about career paths. They always let me do what I want to do and give me the motivation that failure is the mother of success. So as a first-year high school student, I chose to get involved in three organizations. There is a Scout organization called Ambalan, Islamic spiritualism, and Students Company. Student company is a program from a company called Prestasi Junior Indonesia. It provides me with unforgettable experiences. Because the main purpose of the program is to improve student business and communication skills. Such as surveying, promoting our product with social media or brochures, and also going to a newspaper company to do product interviews which have given me more motivation in the media-entertainment world. At the time, my team was named Socioteen Company. Because our product was to sell a village value and do marketing for society. The village that we chose after all the surveys is Nongkosawit Village.

Selling the value of a village is our team's hard struggle. Because the village itself still wasn't unrecognized to many people like hiding gems. But our team's job is to raise that. So for promotion, we came to one and another school, told stories about our product from class to class, and gave brochures at Car Free Day on the weekend. To gain information, Sir Warsono, the head of the village, gave us a tour first. We memorize and pick which spot would be great to sell. He told us that the village name itself was born because of the big tree called Nongkosawit. And they also have a product from a fruit named RUDRAKSHA and make accessories. That all-important information gave us the spirit to make the village more recognized.

Talking about promotion, South Korea is the country that gives many ways to develop all types of content in media entertainment. This intrigued me to choose a major for my associate degree study. Media entertainment plays an important role in Indonesia, old age or children develop knowledge or build their characters through it. Even though my major was computer and networking in high school, I chose to broadcast. Inspired by the South Korea variety show the KBS World Hello Counselor program, they speak and exchange ideas about mental health that must not be taken lightly.

As in Indonesia people still have a deep inside story of each person, becoming their bridge is my ambition. Then I saw my inspirator, Bianca Kartika. She once applied for the GKS program. I watch her content to get close to the GKS program. Seeing that GKS gives a lot of people an opportunity to give a brighter future world, I brave myself to apply. And while searching for a major in broadcasting, DIMA or 동아방송예술대학교 with the largest studio in Asia caught my attention. For me, who wants to get a job at KBS World, in a studio to broadcast and develop content makes me passionate to be one of their people. Making sure to get in both must modules or optional is my promise if I get the opportunity. And join PERPIKA already in my checklist, because I want to get more educated as a person and be useful to both South Korean and Indonesian society.


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Study Plan

-Language study plan

For the Korean language, I studied by myself for about 3 months. I already learn 한글 from Scholar.indo Korean language program and taught me by following all KBS programs to give me the confidence to speak Korean every day in front of a mirror or with friends.

To improve my grammar and communication skills:

* I will join a one-year Korean language class and gain level 4 in TOPIK.

* For every end of the week I plan to read children's storybooks in full Korean.

* Evaluation of the last day every month, I will take a TOPIK example exam.

-Goals of study & Study Plan

I chose broadcasting in entertainment because the curriculum goals are to nurture talented entertainers armed with professional knowledge and capabilities required in today’s broadcasting environment.

* For the first year in their courses, I will get involved in developing great content by professionals. How K-Wave is so booming, what South Korean culture has and how the country got known globally. I’m really interested in where we can have live broadcasting practice in the studio. This year, I will focus on all academic universities to adapt.

* In the second year, I will take the PERPIKA organization and 방송기술계열 대학조직. Also, apply for an intern program at the university.

* For the third year, I will focus on the university final practical and academic test.

-Future Plan after study

* Get a Bachelor's Degree in university for the first year.

* Join DIMA or 동아방송예술대학교 training visual production program in the second year.

* Working for the production team position at KBS in the third year.

* After 2 years, apply to the GKS program for a master's degree with a major in broadcasting at the Korean National University of Arts.

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Personal Statement

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Until we're educating every kid in a fantastic way, until every inner city is cleaned up, there is no shortage of things to do.-Bill gates.

I was a child with an open-minded family who got motivated by my father to go overseas. They particularly were not a strict family type about career paths. They always let me do what I want to do and give me the motivation that failure is the mother of success. So as a first-year high school student, I chose to get involved in three organizations. There is a Scout organization called Ambalan, Islamic spiritualism, and Students Company. Student company is a program from a company called Prestasi Junior Indonesia. It provides me with unforgettable experiences. Because the main purpose of the program is to improve student business and communication skills. Such as surveying, promoting our product with social media or brochures, and also going to a newspaper company to do product interviews which have given me more motivation in the media-entertainment world. At the time, my team was named Socioteen Company. Because our product was to sell a village value and do marketing for society. The village that we chose after all the surveys is Nongkosawit Village.

Selling the value of a village is our team's hard struggle. Because the village itself still wasn't unrecognized to many people like hiding gems. But our team's job is to raise that. So for promotion, we came to one and another school, told stories about our product from class to class, and gave brochures at Car Free Day on the weekend. To gain information, Sir Warsono, the head of the village, gave us a tour first. We memorize and pick which spot would be great to sell. He told us that the village name itself was born because of the big tree called Nongkosawit. And they also have a product from a fruit named RUDRAKSHA and make accessories. That all-important information gave us the spirit to make the village more recognized.

Talking about promotion, South Korea is the country that gives many ways to develop all types of content in media entertainment. This intrigued me to choose a major for my associate degree study. Media entertainment plays an important role in Indonesia, old age or children develop knowledge or build their characters through it. Even though my major was computer and networking in high school, I chose broadcasting for my next study. Inspired by the South Korea variety show the KBS World Hello Counselor program, they speak and exchange ideas about mental health that must not be taken lightly.

As in Indonesia people still have a deep inside story of each person, becoming their bridge is my ambition. Then I saw my inspirator, Bianca Kartika. She once applied for the GKS program. I watch her content to get close to the GKS program. Seeing that GKS gives a lot of people an opportunity to give a brighter future world, I brave myself to apply. And while searching for a major in broadcasting, DIMA or 동아방송예술대학교 with the largest studio in Asia caught my attention. For me, who wants to get a job at KBS World, in a studio to broadcast and develop content makes me passionate to be one of their people. Making sure to get in both must modules or optional is my promise if I get the opportunity. And join PERPIKA already in my checklist, because I want to get more educated as a person and be useful to both South Korean and Indonesian society.

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Study Plan

-Language study plan

For the Korean language, I studied by myself for about 3 months. I already learn 한글 from Scholar.indo Korean language program and taught me by following all KBS programs to give me the confidence to speak Korean every day in front of a mirror or with friends.

To improve my grammar and communication skills:

* I will join a one-year Korean language class and gain level 4 in TOPIK.

* For every end of the week I plan to read children's storybooks in full Korean.

* Evaluation of the last day every month, I will take a TOPIK example exam.

-Goals of study & Study Plan

I chose broadcasting in entertainment because the curriculum goals are to nurture talented entertainers armed with professional knowledge and capabilities required in today’s broadcasting environment.

* For the first year in their courses, I will get involved in developing great content by professionals. How K-Wave is so booming, what South Korean culture has and how the country got known globally. I’m really interested in where we can have live broadcasting practice in the studio. This year, I will focus on all academic universities to adapt.

* In the second year, I will take the PERPIKA organization and 방송기술계열 대학조직. Also, apply for an intern program at the university.

* For the third year, I will focus on the university final practical and academic test.

-Future Plan after study

* Get a Bachelor's Degree in university for the first year.

* Join DIMA or 동아방송예술대학교 training visual production program in the second year.

* Working for the production team position at KBS in the third year.

* After 2 years, apply to the GKS program for a master's degree with a major in broadcasting at the Korean National University of Arts.