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I had to work during the Golden Week holidays, while people were enjoying them.
Is my sentence (which is not a real story) correct?
Thanks
LiJ
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While other people were enjoying them.

(Well, I was really working most of Golden Week-- I only took one day off to visit Ibaragi.)
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The first time I read your sentence, I thought you meant "...while most people were enjoying themselves" (that is, having fun). Then I thought you probably meant "whlie most people were enjoying the holidays." There's nothing actually 'wrong" about your sentence, but it might sound better with one of these alternatives:

I had to work during Golden Week, while most people were enjoying the holidays.

I had to work during Golden Week, while most people were free to enjoy the holidays.

(There's nothing wrong with "the Golden Week holidays" -- I just took "holidays" out of the beginning of the sentence because I thought it was more useful at the end, and I didn't want to repeat it.)
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Mr. M. was much quicker than I was -- and his suggestion is perfect!
Students: Are you brave enough to let our tutors analyse your pronunciation?
khoffit was more useful at the end
Thanks, Knoff. Got it!
Mister MicawberI was really working most of Golden Week
I bet your clients(students) really appreciate your work.
Thanks, Mister.