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Hi

Are these lines natural English? Any suggestions please?

The principal was horrified to see that the students had gone completely rowdy in the past eight months he was abroad. There was total lack of discipline and the teachers were rather indifferent. Misbehavior was the order of the day in the left wing of the college.

Thanks,

Tom

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The principal was horrified to see that the students had become extremely rowdy in the past eight months while he was abroad. There was a total lack of discipline and the teachers were ignoring the situation. Misbehaviour was the order of the day in the left wing of the college.

the left wing of the college. Does this refer to the geographic location?

Or does it refer to people's radical politics? If so, whose? eg those of the teachers? eg those of the students?

Clive

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Thanks, Clive.

--left wing of the college = geographic location

Is the rest of the text fully natural?

Tom

Is the rest of the text fully natural?

Yes (he version with my edits)