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Hi everybody,

I wrote a little msg to my friend telling him about my recent life. Pls check and correct my grammar. Thanks in advance!

"Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! Here, I wish you all the best and happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa has got into the hospital for a month and badly news, he has been approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable, and doctor has consented him to stay back home. I hope mircale would happen to him and won't feel too much pain. Well, no worries about us. As always, I believe love bears everything!"
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I have underlined some problem areas, Miyabi. Please try to fix them and post your efforts.

Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa has got into the hospital for a month and badly news, he has been approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable, and doctor has consented him to stay back home. I hope mircale would happen to him and won't feel too much pain. Well, no worries about us. As always, I believe love bears everything!"
Thank you Mister Micawber, pleases check my correction below:

1. be happy

2. got

3. ??? Pls help

4. and the doctor

5. has consented to let him go back home

6. I hope miracle will happen to him and he does not have too much pain.

Aside from these underlined problems, I know I've problem in writing structure and style in Eng. Please help me make it sounds smooth and feel free to resturcture my sentences.
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Good morning, miyabi.

Please put your corrections into the text and post a new version. It is very difficult to determine whether you are accurate without doing that.

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Mister Micawber, please check and let me know my mistakes. Thank you~

Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and be happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa got into the hospital for a month and there was a bad news that he was approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable. His doctor has consented to let him stay back home. I do hope mircale will happen to him and he does not have to suffer too much pain from his illness. Well, no worries about us. As always, I believe love bears everything!

Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and happiness always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa went into hospital for a month and there was bad news that he was diagnosed with cancer. Now his condition is stabilizing. His doctor has let him stay at home. I do hope a miracle will happen and that he does not have to suffer too much pain from his illness.

Well, no other worries for us. As always, I believe love can bear everything!
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Mister Micawber,

Thank you very much! I learned a lot from you. I've a question, the last sentence "no other worries" is the same as "no worries"? or they have the difference meaning? Can you explain to me?
I added 'other' because you obviously have one worry-- your grandfather. That is the difference. 'No worries' means none at all.
alright, I got it. Thanks
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