I highly appreciate if someone will correct this email.

Dear Nadia,
Following my recent letter and attachments on the 10 Aug 2015, I am enclosing additional document with this letter.
Additional to my other attachment, I am enclosing the last two passports who issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12 01 1968. Furthermore, I am enclosing the amended passport issued on 2014 for your use and information.
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Dear Nadia,
Further to my recent letter of the 10 Aug 2015 plus attachments, I am now enclosing additional documents.
Here are my last two passports, issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth 12 01 1968. Also enclosed for your use and information is the amended passport issued in 2014.

Since this is an email, are you enclosing copies only? If so, you should say so.
Thank you very much indeed
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if we send it to for attention of, is it ok to write it down As............FAO and how we do it
I suggest you avoid such abbreviations.

Isn't it enough to address your email to Nadia and begin with 'Dear Nadia'?
Dear Nadia,
Here I attached the relevant letter and attachment. In addition to the above attachment, I have included another document also with the same letter.
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AnonymousDear Nadia,Here I attached the relevant letter and attachment. In addition to the above attachment, I have included another document also with the same letter.
Oh no! That is a real muddle.
'...please find attached....' not just 'find attached'.

However:
Dear Nadia,
Following my letter and attachments of 10 August, 2015, I am sending you enclosed the two earlier passports which were issued in 2001 and 2010 with the date of birth given as 12/01/1968, and the amended passport issued in 2014 for your current use.
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