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5/15/2005
The San Diego Trip

It was such a sudden decision for the San Diego trip this week. There are few reasons that I went to San Diego this weekend. To visit a friend who I haven’t seen for a quite long time; To rebuild my mind thinking on the life perspectives; To train my indpandency on a long drive trip; To get out of the long cold weather in S.F; To take a big break from all the stresses from work and school.
I have to say that I just passed a wonderful weekend in SD. I am so glad that I could reunion with my Khim who is a friend of mine. We had spent a wonderful weekend together in S.D. We went to Clubbing on the Friday night, it was fun, extremely fun. ‘Flame’ is the name of the club, it’s a gay club which I had never experienced before in S.F. The most attractive part of the place is the cost overall. The admission ticket is very cheap , we paid only $5 each person compared to $20 in S.F The drinks are even cheaper!. $5 for most drinks, that is an unbelievable price compared to $12 dollars in S.F.
However, the music wasn’t good as S.F. Maybe I used to dance under the S.F music.
The second day we went to a block party in S.D. The party is pretty enjoyable to me. It features lot of street concerts, and street food, ect. We almost walked the whole day for it, but then it was fun to walk like this. At Sat night, I brought Khim to a fancy and romantic Indian restaurant in S.D downtown, where I had most incredible time in S.D. The Restaurant is beautiful outside and inside. I specially love the chair, it was the most comfortable chairs that I have very seen in a restaurant before. The food was little and expensive, but it was unbelievable good tasting me, we both liked a lot.
The most important reason for this S.D trip is that I want to drive along and rethinking of my current life. I want to be alone and reassembly my mind thinking. There is so much going to in my life now, I need to think about how to reorganize them, and how to improve them. I thought about so much when I drove on the freeway to S.D and back to S.F. It was a long drive, but my mind wasn’t boring at all, because when I was alone and the drive long distance, it makes me thinking well and sees more in my mind. This trip gives me many lessons in life overall.
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It was such a sudden decision for the San Diego trip this week. There are few reasons for going to San Diego this weekend; to visit a friend who I haven’t seen for a quite long time; to rebuild my mind, thinking on life's perspectives; to train my independency on a long drive trip; to get out of the long cold weather in S.F; to take a big break from all the stress from work and school.
I have to say that I just had a wonderful weekend in SD. I am so glad that I could reunion with Khim, who is a friend of mine. We spent a wonderful weekend together in S.D. We went clubbing on Friday night, it was fun, extremely fun. ‘Flame’ is the name of the club, it’s a gay club which I had never experienced before in S.F. The most attractive part of the place is the overall cost. The admission ticket is very cheap , we paid only $5 each person compared to $20 in S.F The drinks are even cheaper!. $5 for most drinks, that is an unbelievable price compared to $12 dollars in S.F.
However, the music wasn’t good as S.F. Maybe I used to dance under the S.F music.
The second day we went to a block party in S.D. The party was pretty enjoyable to me. It features a lot of street concerts, and street food, ect. We almost walked the whole day for it, but then it was fun to walk like this. At Sat night, I brought Khim to a fancy and romantic Indian restaurant in S.D downtown, where I had most incredible time in S.D. The Restaurant is beautiful outside and inside. I especially loved the chair, it was the most comfortable chair that I have ever seen in a restaurant before. The food was little and expensive, but it was unbelievable good tasting me, we both liked it a lot.
The most important reason for this S.D trip is that I want to drive along and rethinking of my current life. I want to be alone and reassemble my mind thinking. There is so much going on in my life now, I need to think about how to reorganize it, and how to improve it. I thought about so much when I drove on the freeway to S.D and back to S.F. It was a long drive, but my mind wasn’t boring at all, because when I was alone and the drive long distance, it makes me think well and see more in my mind. This trip gave me many lessons in life overall.

Which is the correct way?


At the party there was food, music and a lot more fun.

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At the party there were food, music and a lot more fun.