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hello

i was just reading an article on drug abuse and i came across this sentence can someone correct it for me

1 If you snort it you don't have to take as much as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do

or would you say

1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do

and if someone could also correct the following it be great and tell me about the punctuation and grammar

1 I don't remember what i last wrote was/what it was i last wrote
2 When there is a mosquito in the room make sure not to expose any bare skin so as not to allow it to bite you/don't leave any body part visible for it to bite
3 For most of the time/for the majority of the time, he was coope up in his room
4 He won't make it for the birth of his child/make it in time for the birth of his child
5 The bed sheet wasn't laid out properly, so we turned it rightside up so as to be able to cover our feet with it
6 His acting isn't so good as to be able to pull of a role the likes of this one

thank you

al
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1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do OK

and if someone could also correct the following it be great and tell me about the punctuation and grammar

1 I don't remember what i last wrote was/what it was i last wrote I don't remember what i last wrote/I don't remember what it was i last wrote
2 When there is a mosquito in the room make sure not to expose any bare skin so as not to allow it to bite you/don't leave any body part visible for it to bite I'd go with the first one
3 For most of the time/for the majority of the time, he was coope up in his room BOTH
4 He won't make it for the birth of his child/make it in time for the birth of his child 2nd one sounds better to me
5 The bed sheet wasn't laid out properly, so we turned it rightside up so as to be able to cover our feet with it I don't know if this could be siad
6 His acting isn't so good as to be able to pull of a role the likes of this one OK

thats what i think if you can tell me if my correctionare right, itd be nice i'll do the same for the previous thread

thank you
1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do OK-- Not OK: there is a capitalization problem, two punctuation problems, a comparative adjective problem, and a confused word choice.

1 I don't remember what it was i last wrote I don't remember what i last wrote/I don't remember what it was i last wrote-- these are OK except capitalization
2 When there is a mosquito in the room make sure not to expose any bare skin so as not to allow it to bite you/don't leave any body part visible for it to bite I'd go with the first one-- punctuation
3 For most of the time/for the majority of the time, he was coope up in his room BOTH-- typographical error.
4 He won't make it for the birth of his child/make it in time for the birth of his child 2nd one sounds better to me-- both OK
5 The bed sheet wasn't laid out properly, so we turned it rightside up so as to be able to cover our feet with it I don't know if this could be siad-- Not and be understood. I don't understand how the sheet is being redeployed.
6 His acting isn't so good as to be able to pull of a role the likes of this one OK-- Not OK; a spelling or word confusion error.
1 you don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it and the affects are a lot strong and last longer when you do OK-- Not OK: there is a capitalization problem, two punctuation problems, a comparative adjective problem, and a confused word choice. COULD YOU HELP ME FIX THIS SENTENCE PLEASE

2 When there is a mosquito in the room, make sure not to expose any bare skin so as not to allow it to bite you/,don't leave any body part visible for it to bite. I put in the punctuatuion , is that right now, and which would you go for if both?
3 For most of the time/for the majority of the time, he was cooped up in his room BOTH-- is that better now and are both good?
6 His acting isn't so good as to be able to pull off a role the likes of this one IS it OK now?
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1 You don't have to take as much if you snort it as if you smoke it, and the effects are a lot stronger and last longer when you do.

2 One seems about as good as the other.
3 One seems about as good as the other.
6 OK