Hello teachers!

I've wrote a para for my essay.

Please correct grammatical mistakes and if you have better structured sentenses, just recommend me !!!!!!

Thanks in advance! ;D



Looking through the guidelines to complement EFL teaching class, I found out how awful our English classes habe been. I'm sure that if I had been taught in the way listed in the book, we, students didn't need to go abroad to study English which caused social problems such as "wild geese". Among eight guidelines, I don't think any of these criteria was performed in our classroom. I've never been exposed to the English speaking environment, not only inside but also outside the classroom. Homework was usually composed of memorizing and repeatedly writing words and translating a main dialogue. I've never dreamt given homework such as watching English speaking movie or TV, even to listening to radio program. Those work might be regarded as a reckless attempt of a teacher. Now I think if I had given such innovative homework in my school days, I would have hooked on 'Sponge Bob' earlier and studied English more enthusiastically.


Highligted a few glaring errors for you.



I found out how awful our English classes habe been.

we, students didn't need to go abroad to study English which caused social problems such as "wild geese" (irrelevant). Among eight guidelines, I don't think any of these criteria was performed in our classroom. I've never been exposed to the English speaking environment, not only inside or outside the classroom.

I've never dreamt given homework such as watching English speaking movie or TV or listening to radio programs.

Those work might be regarded as a reckless attempt of a teacher.

Now I think if I had given such innovative homework in my school days