+0
Hello,

I have a narrative paper that I have to write and I have finished the whole thing. Since I dont think it would be right to post the whole thing to have checked as it would be very time consuming I was hoping some one could just check my first paragraph for any gramatical errors. As I have a hard time noticing what I have done wrong. any help would be greatly appreciated.

Cruise



I have had several great vacations in my life, but this past summer I had the best vacation ever! It was an eight day cruise in the eastern with one of my best friends, which was stupendous. We were destined for five ports of call and two days at sea. Since this was my first cruise experience I really had no idea what to expect. Of the five ports of call, three of them stood out , Puerto Rico, Antigua and . The boat, Carnival Liberty, left Port Everglades on Saturday May 26 at 4:00PM. We finally arrived at our first destination, , , at five pm, Monday, just as the sun was starting to set.
+0
Yinian
Cruise



I have had several great vacations in my life, but this past summer I had the best vacation ever! It was an eight day cruise in the eastern with one of my best friends, which was stupendous. We were destined scheduled for five ports of call and two days at sea. Since this was my first cruise experience, I really had no idea what to expect. Of the five ports of call, three of them stood out: in Puerto Rico, Antigua, and . The boat, Carnival Liberty, left Port Everglades on Saturday May 26 at 4:00PM. We finally arrived at our first destination, , , at five pm, Monday, just as the sun was starting to set.

Be consistent with your times.
+0
Also, use semi-colons to separate the three ports of call. San Juan, Puerto Rico; Antigua; and Nassau, Bahamas.

Otherwise, if someone doesn't know the area, it looks like five places.
Site Hint: Check out our list of pronunciation videos.
Comments  
YinianHello,

Cruise



I have had several great vacations in my life, but this past summer I had the best vacation ever! It was an eight day cruise in the eastern with one of my best friends, which was stupendous. We were destined for five ports of call and two days at sea. Since this was my first cruise experience I really had no idea what to expect. Of the five ports of call, three of them stood out , Puerto Rico, Antigua and . The boat, Carnival Liberty, left Port Everglades on Saturday May 26 at 4:00PM. We finally arrived at our first destination, , , at five pm, Monday, just as the sun was starting to set.

eight-day cruise

 BarbaraPA's reply was promoted to an answer.
Students: We have free audio pronunciation exercises.