hi im not sure if this is a good thesis sentence, and im wondering if some of you could help me make it stronger

its about hamlet and how tis a revenge tragedy. like how the ghost of his father wants revenge on claudius and how hamlet seeks revenge on him and delays his actions

Throughout the play Hamlet is slowed by many choices he has to make and uses extremes to display the theme that the pursuit of revenge leads to tragedy.
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In the course of the play, Hamlet is confronted by many choices he must make, and [Shakespeare?] uses extremes to present his theme that the pursuit of revenge leads to tragedy.

Your thesis sentence sounds OK, Jeng; what is more important than the thesis statement itself is how well you fulfil it with the body of your essay.
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alright, thank you so much, and yea i know what you mean by my ESSAY has to fulfill it.

is this better? i sort of revised it, or is it choppy?

In the course of the play, Hamlet is confronted by many choices he must make, and Shakespeare uses extremes to present how revenge leads to tragedy.
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I'm not sure it's revenge that leads to tragedy, on Hamlet's part. Poor time-management in the pursuit of revenge, perhaps.

MrP
Hello-- I am English teacher looking to see if a student copied a paper from here or not. Is there any way I can see the whole paper? Or, did he just submit the thesis for help?
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AnonymousHello-- I am English teacher looking to see if a student copied a paper from here or not. Is there any way I can see the whole paper?
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MrP
Mr. P., you're a cynic!
Hey can anyone help me
I am writing an essay on Hamlet
the essay question provided was " In all versions of the story, the theme is the same: revenge!" Explore how the play Hamlet is a tragedy of revenge.

I am stuck on writing a thesis statement for that topic sentence
can anyone help
i came up with an idea but im not too sure on

In William Shakespeare's tragedy Hamlet the main theme discussed throuout the play was revenge and how the act of certain individuals lead to the downfall of many. Fortibras, Laertes and Hamlet all seek revenge to the deaths of their fathers

Thats what i have so far, can anyone help me out
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