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what else would a happy moment be than seeing kids are happy and enjoying the moment.


Is that correct please correct this?

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I can understand what you want to say , but I don't think it's correct as it is, I think it needs modifying. Honestly, I also struggled to make it in a way that makes me feel I could express the actual meaning you wanted. I'm not sure of my sentences structure either, these are just trying: ☺


-What else would it be more happy other than seeing kids' happiness.

-What would be happier than seeing happy kids enjoying their moment.

-What would be happier than seeing children are happy and enjoying their moment.

-Nothing happy as much as seeing kids' happiness.

-No happiness as much as seeing happy kids enjoying their life.

-Nothing much happier than seeing kids are happy and enjoying their life.

-There is nothing equal to seeing kids' happiness.

Liton DasIs that correct

No.

Liton Dasplease correct this?

I tried, but I deleted it because I don't know what you mean.