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Hi teachers.

I'm practicing IELTS writing and I need to describe the picture I attached.

Is the following good? or how can I correct it to be more well-written one?


50% of the compound is sand, a quarter crushed rock, 15% cement and 10% water.

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I can't see the picture.

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Oh now I see that I forgot to button the "Add to post".


The picture is not that significant since the figures are all written.

I do want to know whether the sub-verb deletion sounds ok.

Thanks:D

Try:

Concrete is 50% sand, a quarter crushed rock, 15% cement and 10% water.